A short gift written for the awesome author of the Pregnant Scootaloo Tumblr. Set right in after the most recent update.
Scoots and Dash are staying with Fluttershy, when the timid yellow mare takes off in the middle of the night with a storm looming. Worried when she doesn't make it back before the storm breaks, they search for her in the dark and the rain.
(you might not understand everything if you haven't read the tumblr, but this is just a short and sweet slice-of-life for the storyline and the author of awesome)
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Awwww~ This was very sweet! Thank you, this is absolutely wonderful! <3
There are a few tiny errors though~ Like Scootaloo's birthday won't be till after she gives birth, but you didn't know so its forgivable! The pacing also does seem a little quick at time. Like it started off great, but then Fluttershy is stuck in the storm, they go out and find her. Felt a little rushed, but you did write this fairly quickly. And it did have a very sweet ending.
Overall I loved this! It was fantastic! I'd love to see more of these <3
A very sweet story, and a fitting gift for an awesome writer.
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I confess to finishing this at something like four in the morning, and not being entirely coherent when I posted this. I barely remembered how I ended it! I'm sorry about the mix up, since her birthday isn't set in the canon, I just took a shot in the dark. Sorry.
Yeah, I admit that was a bit rushed, I may go back and fix it later. Glad you liked it regardless of the horrible mistakes.
1066425 when will you update silent ponyville 3?
1070371 since when was apple bloom saying with fluttershy? and yes i saw the pregnant scootaloo tumblr and i didn't see anything about applebloom being with those three
I tumbled down here where I found him all alone and crying. He was scared and I couldn’t leave him.”
Missing a quotation mark.
Also, somewhere scootaloo said either instead I neither.
Fun story though! :D