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An Intricate Disguise

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Ok I'll be the first to say this. This better not be abandoned cuz this needs to be finished.

I've written the first three chapters and half of the fourth. It's going to be finished tonight and all of it will be posted by a week from now at the latest.

I've learnt not to make promises I can't keep but I'm certain on this one.

Are you going to finish this story

I direct you to the comment beneath this one.

And because of that I'm looking forward to this story. ^w^

Not gonna upvote this until it's completed. :trixieshiftleft:

I remember that something happened irl that took you away from fimfictition, I hope everything is alright and that you are doing well.

dRaGoNs DoNt HaVe TiTtIeS bEcAuSe ThEiR nOt MaMmAlS RRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEeeEeeEEeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEE :twilightangry2:


Should dragons have had tits? You’d leave that debate for the fantastical herpetologists.

Leaving me excited to read more with one chapter ... Bravo

Aww yiss. This gonna be good.

I don't know why I got the impression it was actually titled (I Don't Even WANT To) Fuck You!
Would've been tsundereier that way.

Comment posted by Flutterpriest deleted Jun 22nd, 2019

Sauce for the cover image (very NSFW): derpibooru search ID:2042599

You're a good man. I left the artist but not the ID, I'll put it in now!

9689236 No probs! Great story, by the way.

Okay, really wanna see more of this.

It's funny and has some hints towards some racy moments between Anon and Ember.

Too bad we'll probably never get to see Ember and Guilda meet on the show. I'd love to see Ember's abrasive personality go up against a griffon.

Wait a moment, he is wearing a waistcoat and a belt? That is a serious fashion don't. There is no way Rarity would ok that. A belt with a waistcoat just draws attention to your junk and breaks up the clean lines of a properly tailored suit. He should be wearing suspenders under that waistcoat. And not the kind that clip on either. The kind where they button to the inside of the pants.

Is this gonna be another 1 chapter fic cancelled?

I am IN LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WITH EMBER. pless make part 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bruh chill, it just came out yesterday :rainbowlaugh:

Ember has breasts?
So.....shouldn't this have an anthro tag?

Guess I shouldn't mention the argonians from the elder scrolls games then xD :rainbowlaugh:

Amazing first chapter keep it up

Where is the picture art used for this story? i want that busty Ember pic

Edit: NVM found it

I ALMOST feel sorry for anon's pelvis...almost... the rest of me envies him....I'm gonna go hide in the corner now...

You put a finger to your chin. If you’re wrong, you have to eat with chopsticks for an entire day.

That’s some hardcore stuff right there, especially for someone with no fingers

Why worry about his pelvis? Are you really sure he on bottom?
If he always on top he will be fine... Right?

Do you really believe, for even one second, that someone as dominant as Ember would be on bottom? She might not stay on top, she may even have a subby side that crops up, but I can almost guarantee that it will start with her on top damn near HATE F#%*ing him into whatever surface they land on.

Why did you need a bowtie anyways? You weren’t a freaking butler.

And I thought Batman was the detective.

He shouldn’t diss the Bow tie, Bowties are cool.

:rainbowlaugh: I think I've seen that in another story here at some point. It was one that involved Vinyl and Tavi most likely.

Ah those sleak, sexy Argonian women. Yeah, that have breasts too, but magic is a funny thing that way.

It's always amazing how sweet Ember can be while being blunt and abrasive.

“So, what was that like? Your first kill, I mean.”

Yeah, that's the sort of thing you don't forget. Mine was a duck, right in front of a group of ladies out on a hen weekend. But, fly birds of prey long enough and it'll happen, even if you don't actively hunt with them.

I'm sure the human can find some way to keep me occupied.

We need the next chapter, just like Ember needs the D.

Probably, as not many MLP characters wear Bow-ties.

Most likely, it might have even been said during Justice League Unlimited or it's predecessor Justice League as well. I know I've heard that before.

Another great story. I like it.

The Monk
"I-I'm sorry, did you just say 'blowjob'?" Jesse had to think seriously hard about this.” -An Intricate Disguise

Looks like things are starting to heat up.

I am enjoying this very much, looking forward to more stuff between Ember and the resident Human.


And the way that Ember looks at you? That’s friendship.

It comes across more as lust than friendship so far. I mean really, she was looking at "me" like a piece meat.

Next, she finally opens up...her legs...

The suspense is killing me.

Ok. Moving to favs. Nicely coming along.

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