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SoulSpirit


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Crap... still need to finish his old life.

Sweet. I wasn't expecting a sequel so soon. Just finished One Way Trip last night. I look forward to this one.

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yeah, and I wasn't expecting to release this yet myself. I wanted to make use I was going to stay a few chapters ahead from now on so I could make sure I had time to make sure I don't mess up and cringe the story this time around.

Cant wait for more!

Sorry to do this on such short notice, but we’re now closed. We’re relocation to Ponyville.

I was hoping you would help feel that void

🤔

The sound of lil hippogryph feet dancing in Spirit's future?

I really lik this story. You're should have Spirt to go Equestria to and see what kind a trouble he can gets stirred up when he's having around ponies and very good.

also, i like

Glad to start helping ya, bud.

I'm not gonna lie I despise the idea of herds, but I'll read on I guess even if this chapter put me off a bit

Really enjoying the sequel and the editor is a god send for the grammar, spelling, and pacing so thank for being such a good editor editing person also thanks for the story and can’t wait to see more!

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To be honest, I wasn't too into the idea either. Though, if one want's attention they play to the audience. It was a factor a friend recommended me to try.

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I'll be honest, I didn't expect anyone to be interested up till here.

10036374 Ah well there is a group of us that do enjoy it.

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Well its still a pretty good story

I really enjoyed these two stories so far. The pacing is enjoyable, nothing feels rushed in my opinion. Hope you have a wonderful day.

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Thanks man. The support is a big factor deciding to continue.

I dropped you a like... but it broke. I was going to leave you a comment, but I don't remember where I left it. I did enjoy it, though. So... 1 out of 3.

Oh, well.

Finding Fang was easier than I thought it would be. All I had to do was look for the yellow pegusus that was all over him. I had to practically sneak out the front door to avoid Pinkie Pie.

She just let you go. Why just eat the mouse when you can hunt it again.

"Yes, Sir," he responded before taking the lead.

Ma'am

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I'm not sure Pinkie has the ability to think that far ahead, even for parties since she holds them on the same day she gets the idea.

APS

Of course, I was disappointed in myself. What was I thinking, lashing out on Apple Jack like that? I needed to think and to do that, I needed to be alone. So I left the city limits, making my way to the EverFree Forest.

Would have been interesting to read what happened, as it is now, it feels almost as if a chapter is missing.

And congrats on being a better / evolved author on this story, i actually saved it in my library.


Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

Nice new cover art, looks like you have more support for your story, keep it up:raritywink:

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Thanks man. Means a lot from you. I'll get started on another chapter soon.

I look forward to what comes next. Good luck with the story.

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thanks. I'm not too sure when I'll get around to it, but I really should. Thanks.

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Gotta agree, feels like a big chunk of context is missing here.

And thus, I get to the end. Now I just gotta wait for more, if it ever comes.

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Thanks. To be honest, life has gotten soooooo in the way. And it's been so long I'd have to go back and reread my own story to remember where it's headed before I continue. I currently have covid, and I'm still recovering from an accident from before that, but I'll do my best to get around to this.

Of course, I was disappointed in myself. What was I thinking, lashing out on Apple Jack like that? I needed to think and to do that, I needed to be alone. So I left the city limits, making my way to the EverFree Forest.

Uhhhh I think a chapter is missing. Like when did they get off the train?

“So, basically, he’s your pet now?” she asked. I nodded. Her eyes grew in amazement. “Fascinating. The first pony to tame a Timber Wolf. I knew you were a strange one, but not this strange.”

More like second. Course that was a girl not a boy.

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The plan is to get back to it some day, but every time I decide to, Life just seems to not let me, but it is the plan some day

I'm loving the story I hope u finish it no rush thow I know life com's first thean figuring out how to juggle every thing

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Lol, thanks my dude, and yeah, life is busy, and not ollnly have I kinda fell out of the community it was also for so long I kinda lost this account for a fat minute. I need to reread my story up to where I left off and pick up where I left off, but once I get back to writing and all that it will still be a slow process. Though I can tease that a very long time back I did out into my back pocket the permission to borrow an oc side character from a story on this site that did indeed blow up at the time I was more active here, so we'll see what happens. Lol, I think I still have my drawings saved digitally somewhere when I was drawing and designing some of the ocs I made for this series, like spirit, Spirits corrupt like state, kerie, and that one oc I made to run his favorite Cafe. Lol, maybe I could make a little spin off or two as well if my stories pop off again. Like a daily life series or something or a non cannon story. Maybe a blog post where people can reply with a vote a character from the show they'd like to see spirit shipped with. Lol.

Still rereading for my continued writing. I also seem to be remembering my old neck for planting all these seeds rather decently in advance

Alright, I've finished re-reading. That means soon it'll be time to get to writing

I panicked a bit as I I knew I didn't study shield magic,

where my my bags were stored since Luna had me stay in her bed for the night.

"That wanna be Queen is actually struggling against Tia.

how easily chaos will break out at any second for them at the rate they were going, so I was expecting things to get crazier than a bat out of hell, but that didn't happen. To see what the hold up was I took Luna's Telescope to get a better view.

allowing me time to look them over. The biggest thing that stood them out to me were their

At least she knew to be careful.

why not sit on the edge of the bed."

I recommended them.

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you mean the ending? Yeah, I mean while being a "pro" with some magics he's studied and some weapons, the last story really was just him getting lucky really. From some of the changling lore I gathered before deciding this rout They had a history that would imply Spirit doesn't havve nearly have the level of experience to work off of as they do, and personally I thought it would be pretty boring if it went the OP rout of him just insta-clapping their cheeks. lol.

Wow... you sure posted that one fast. I probably should have given it another once over.

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you can if you want. It hasn't been up that long

and anyone who read one way trip knows my stories are always subject to late edits

Lets go luna is in the hearm

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