Given that description, that kiss shouldn't have been in the top trillion.
And with that last line… I'm having flashbacks to the Belgariad, so I'm entirely gratuitously glad she didn't suddenly get annihilated by an upset force of nature.
"What d'you say, Fluttershy? You wanna try being my girlfriend?" Now that she'd said it, that leaden weight inside her blossomed all at once into some kind of lifeforce, a new source of energy. "You won't have to worry about being possessive then."
...Yeah, gonna say that she should watch out for some of what she had going on last chapter. The outing their sexual relationship without permission, the threatening part, and the power move of saying that Sunset was keeping her penis a secret at her behest (especially when there's only the barest hint--her telling Sunset about the garment problem before Sunset thought of it herself--that this might be true) all look like warning signs to me.
9739618 Yes, I suppose I misread that part a bit. But if anything I think there's even less prior indication that she was keeping that secret because Fluttershy wanted her to (unless I forgot something--skimmed the Prologue again but that's it), and the implication that it was a mistake not to tell the rest doesn't seem to follow in the same way unless it was packaged with them already defining their relationship differently than they had seemed to. If anything, for some of them I'd imagine just hearing "I'm having (casual) sex with another one of my friends" would make them more likely to make a move (and possibly less inappropriate ones than Twilight or Rainbow did).
Sunset gave her a wry smile. "Well, I don't just like you just because you swallow."
Upon rereading, this story is now ruined. Fluttershy doesn’t swallow. She gets facials. Literally unreadable. What the hell are you even doing with your life?
Given that description, that kiss shouldn't have been in the top trillion.
And with that last line… I'm having flashbacks to the Belgariad, so I'm entirely gratuitously glad she didn't suddenly get annihilated by an upset force of nature.
But still adorable.😁
“Hello. My name is Sunset Shimmer. You killed my libido; prepare to die.”
That is the most beautiful kiss I've ever read.
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Given some of the kisses I've had...Pretty sure it's at least in the top 5 million.
...Yeah, gonna say that she should watch out for some of what she had going on last chapter. The outing their sexual relationship without permission, the threatening part, and the power move of saying that Sunset was keeping her penis a secret at her behest (especially when there's only the barest hint--her telling Sunset about the garment problem before Sunset thought of it herself--that this might be true) all look like warning signs to me.
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Sunset were keepin' the sex a secret.
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Yes, I suppose I misread that part a bit. But if anything I think there's even less prior indication that she was keeping that secret because Fluttershy wanted her to (unless I forgot something--skimmed the Prologue again but that's it), and the implication that it was a mistake not to tell the rest doesn't seem to follow in the same way unless it was packaged with them already defining their relationship differently than they had seemed to. If anything, for some of them I'd imagine just hearing "I'm having (casual) sex with another one of my friends" would make them more likely to make a move (and possibly less inappropriate ones than Twilight or Rainbow did).
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As you wish. 😝
Upon rereading, this story is now ruined. Fluttershy doesn’t swallow. She gets facials. Literally unreadable. What the hell are you even doing with your life?
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A fine question, matey. A fine question indeed...
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That makes swallowing a lot messier, but doesn't actually remove it as a possibility.
Nice reference