• Member Since 16th Jul, 2017
  • offline last seen February 21st

XXXScale


Sticks and Stones may break my bones, but nothing could ever kill me.

Comments ( 7 )

I say we sneak in threw the back door.

Through.

"No! For the last time Ruby, your plan will get us killed faster than Spikes smoking habit!" yelled the male dragon while he looked at there human friend who sat on the grassy floor cigar in hand while relaxing in the moon light. "Spikes looks like he's enjoying himself over there, not like this bounty would get us all killed, wait...it will."

Spike’s.

Midnight and Spike, i want you two to go in

I.

out post house

Outpost.

few guards but spike with

Spike.

Other than those mistakes that I can see it’s an interesting start. Looking forward to seeing some background on how Spike arrived in Equestria.

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Other than those mistakes

Bruh...

Outside a large old looking watch tower, were many guards for the every target the group of bounty hunters came for (<— nigh incomprehensible). The group stood not that far from the area as a what looks like a huge alien-like ship parked while a group of five stood. (<— also nigh incomprehensible)

And that was just the first paragraph.

Why are ratings disabled?

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Because he is unwilling to learn nor does he try to improve. He makes many chapter ones and never continues them.

Oof i like it alot it needs a little work but other than that its good

Is this getting an update?

Will this continue?


And will the two Spikes interact?

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