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[Part Two of the Riflepony Series] Braeburn was once a simple, humble farmer; not the type of pony one would look at twice. But a little over a year ago, all of that changed. Before then, he hadn't met the pony of his dreams. Before then, he hadn't discovered his lineage and new-found talent. Before then, he hadn't been prepared for the adventure that he was about to embark on. Now all the cards are on the table, and not just his life. Join Braeburn and Daring Do in this high-action installment of the Riflepony Series as they struggle with not only a new quest, but with fate as well. Old enemies have returned, and have formed a fearsome alliance. In the midst of chaos and absolute danger, Braeburn might have to break his one and only rule, as the new Colt of the West.

Proofread by JohnPerry and RenaTurnip

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I was wondering why this wasnt in my notifications but then i realized i wasnt watching you

This is definitely going to be good.

OMG It'S FINALLY HERE!!! EEEE!!! :pinkiehappy:

Happy Days are here again. Praise the almighty flying spaghetti monster!:ajbemused::heart::twilightoops::pinkiesad2::flutterrage::rainbowdetermined2::trixieshiftright::rainbowkiss::raritydespair:

Oh shit...

I. HATE. CLIFFHANGERS.

God I just know this is going to be good! Can't wait for more!

Heres some western tunes for ye

Also Applejack acting all western
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FInally OMG i fricking love western!:rainbowkiss:

I'm wanted, (WAAAN-TED!) Dead or alive!

God damn this is gonna be so good. It's obvious what you do for a living, DB. :rainbowwild:

Aerial Ace nice name.

Also dat cliffhanger!

Welp, that took even less time than I would have suspected to hit the box.
And to concur with the fanbase: DAT ROMANCE TAG.twilight.ponychan.net/chan/arch/src/130649728613.gif

Oh shii..
Also, Aerial Ace is best filly.

... I think "oh snap" may be an appropriate feeling for the end of this chapter. Although I can safely admit that the exclamation I made aloud was a little more explicit than that.

part of me can't help but wonder if Aerial Ace might have a more personal reason for asking about the Colt of the West.

update soon, please?

Sequel! Screw the Read Later, this goes directly to tracking.

conclusion to the Riflepony Series

:pinkiegasp: ...series? There's more than just this and Treasure?

omygodomygodomygod!!!. I loved the 1st one and now thers a sequel?
:pinkiehappy:

moar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Just read the last chapter, and the only thing that comes to mind is: "Well shit."

-Minty

Slower-paced, longer story?
Another Western?
Long-awaited sequel to Treasure in the West?
Braeburn/Daring Do?
Count me in.
And I have some interesting premonitions about the directions that this story could take...
I shall just leave it at that.
Plus, some music that I thought would be fitting.

Got no checkbook, got no bank.
Still I'd like to express my thanks,
I've got the sun in the morning and the moon at night.~

And now, a sequel to Treasure in the West, too.

I love you.

Well now, I am happy this is up! And shocked that its mere existence hasn't already catapaulted it to EqDaily. But it will find its way home in due time.

In the mean time, I'm going to start what I didn't finish and-wait, wut?

Bah, I'm going to finish reading the first chapter of the prequel, and then I'll start here. Four chapters should be up by then. :rainbowlaugh:

...

I really should've done that before I posted here, huh?

:facehoof:

OMG it is finally here insta fav... and who the buck has braeburn at gunpoint, they obviously dont know that brae brae has back up

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:facehoof:

And, you know, getting the first post and exclaiming that you've gotten such, I'm quite sure, is a temporary ban.

hooray! let the games begin!

I'll have to read it later

Oh, hell yeah. By all that is holy, this could quite possibly be the sequel I've most anticipated of all time. The first was excellent...and the Colt of the West promises to live up to its predecessor, and more. Get this shit onto EQD, stat! The world must know.

A Sequel? To one of my favorite stories? I'm IN! :rainbowkiss:

The Color of Apples series and yours, good sir, are probably the best stories i've ever read. I love the way this sequel is looking and it's only the first chapter! I love to imagine my self as the protagonist in really good, descriptive stories. This is one of those stories. Well played. MOOOOOOAR

this is sure going to be one hell of a ride... MOAR!!!!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!!!!! I WANNA SEE DARING AGAIN!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Please...continue...
Can't.....survive........without....................more.....:raritydespair:

Peace in Appleloosa!
Aaaaaaand it's gone.

*insert chorus of angels singing "Halejula"*

How did I know Coltwell would be involved somehow?

Huzzah! Colt of the West is here! Western story-lovers rejoice! Congrats on getting the feature box yet again, too!

Rapturious joy for the return of everypony's favorite tool, with added romance tag and all. Truly we will have quite a treat.

ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh Sequel? Yes please! AND WITH A ROMANCE TAG OHHHHH YAY!

I got a notification when this was first posted, but I had to put it off because of school. Reading it now, I wish I had ignored college to read this.

Also, a Romantic-Tragedy-Adventure tag, if there was a dark tag I would have thought you'd stole my half-assed excuse for a sequel idea.:scootangel:

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