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NFSW

I hope you enjoy my blend of stories with a dash of innovation to spice things up.

NFSW Joined 2nd Jan, 2018 · Offline

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Frosty_mage
Frosty_mage #1 · Jun 19th, 2019 · · · Milking It ·
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Overall, an enjoyable story. There were a couple redundant portions that read weirdly (e.g. the part about legal age to start milking). Also, "she was a mare so her physical strength triumphed over mine" is just said and passed over like it's nothing. Are we goimg to learn a bit more about this universe in upcoming chapters?

NFSW
NFSW #2 · Jun 19th, 2019 · · · Milking It ·
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9687337
I'm glad you extracted enjoyment in this story despite the myriad of flaws it has. And yes, I have every intention to expand this universe in further chapters.

Frosty_mage
Frosty_mage #3 · Jun 20th, 2019 · · · Snuggle Partner ·
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Sounds good. You don't have to go super in depth into how everything works (no need to say "mares are x times stronger than they look/than stallions" or whatever), but the story is written with the assumption that the reader is familiar with the "rules" for your world when this is not necessarily the case. Just some sort of backstory for the reader would be nice.

Dragonwaz
Dragonwaz #4 · Jul 31st, 2019 · · · Assholes ·
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Oh, and Flim and Flam will be gender swapped.

The Shim Sham Sisters? :rainbowlaugh:

NFSW
NFSW #5 · Jul 31st, 2019 · · · Assholes ·
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Yes, the Shim Sham sisters.

Scoutboy25
Scoutboy25 #8 · Dec 5th, 2019 · · · Snuggle Partner ·
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At first, she had my curiosity. Now, she had my attention. “It’s kind of rare you hear somebody chose a career to spite somebody. Especially there mom.” I commented. “She really didn’t want you to become a seamstress, huh?” I inquired.

their

Scoutboy25
Scoutboy25 #9 · Dec 5th, 2019 · · · Snuggle Partner ·
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I nestled my muzzleonto her boobs, closing my eyes, the prospect of doing this with the other girls was appealing. Maybe I’ll bring it up to them… on second thought, probably not.

muzzle onto

Acetureeye
Acetureeye #10 · Dec 25th, 2022 · · · Assholes ·
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Gotta wonder are you ever even coming back to any of these old stores Also Merry Christmas

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