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TheMessenger


Amateur fanfic writer and reader. Sometimes I get dreams, dreams of ponies, and wish that someone would write a story based off them. So why not me?

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It starts with a strange package in the mail. Many adventures do.

Soon, Twilight Sparkle and Spike will find themselves on their craziest adventure yet. An adventure of mysterious stallions and odd outhouses, of intergalactic odysseys and temporal travel, of a world vastly different from their own.

Caught in the middle of a bloody conflict, Twilight and Spike must work together with the natives, make new allies and defeat new enemies, and teach this strange new world the magic of friendship all while learning the values of freedom and liberty.

Or maybe they’ll just hide under a bed and wait for the whole thing to blow over.

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Comments ( 8 )

Glad to see you still kicking.

You wrote this entire story just for that pun, didn't you? Well played.

Also, I love how casual Spike was regarding a strange situation that could've been very dangerous. Was fun.

One of the first for this contest and we're off to a solid start.

Take your upvote, jovial "fuck you", and get out.

~Skeeter The Judge

“Doctor who?”

Now, now, you're supposed to wait until the end for the terrible pun.

...but if it’s so bad why haven’t we teleported?

I was wondering that myself.

Delightful entry. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the contest.

Twilight had long since grown accustomed.

Missing a “to”.

Other than that, lovely entry. I laughed out loud at the end.

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Thanks for catching that.

PresentPerfect
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oh god, this contest was a mistake, what have I gotten myself into

I'm gonna have to remember "blue outhouse" though, that was inspired.

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