Interesting looking forward to seeing the next chapter

Wow, wonderful execution of the MC stuff!

Looks like you have forgotten to add the anthro tag. Good start so far otherwise.

At least she puts effort to it.

Oh yea, this has potential.
Can't wait to see more of this!

I'm loving this. Can't wait to see what else she does. Maybe Twilight could be brought into the fun.

You see this shit right here? This is my cup of tea.

BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEYN
BRING ME THE TEA

Noooooooo!!! Not tea!!! Anything but that!

sounds good but why can't Luna be the sub? I would love to see a luna sub version or sequel

Oh, god damnit! I've read four clopfics in the last two days that hit all my major kinks, Dom-Sub, Mind Breaking, Hypno and another that no one needs to know...

I enjoy the way clopfics are going

Do you have a link/reference for the cover image?

Wow, that's a lot of notifications. Hello, front page!

9680054 I can't link it because nsfw, but it's by dimwitdog and also here's a completely random set of numbers that have absolutely nothing to do with Derpibooru: 1778865.

9680031 Do share

9680030 I've been on a bit of a Celestia kick lately. I may or may not have something in my to-write pile involving Luna and her sister's changeling dick, though. Maybe someday.

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9679427 I'm pretty sure it's been there since before I published it? It's there now, anyway, and I haven't edited it.

Contains, or will contain: posthypnotic suggestion, sadism, induced masochism, corruption of morals, (pr)incest, femdom/sub, rape, memory manipulation, bondage, repeated mind-breaking, and lots and lots of tea.

I think that last one makes it just a bit too hardcore...

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The fourth kink I've read recently is futadom, not a new for me... but one of the first clopfics I've cought with futadom in it, there was the other "Sun Drenched" I believe with Futaxmale, which is also good

I predict a few art pieces by the artist kuroran of Luna dominating Celestia might be referred to during the course of the story. Look them up on derpibooru if desired.

This was a fun read :) I hope you keep going with it.

Hmm..

Sauce of image: derpibooru and search for ID:1892841

3 great stories in 2 weeks, you're a damn machine!

LUNA IS BEST PONY !!!

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ah ok well thanks for the reply and I'm a Celestia fan and its just sucks to see she doesn't get the amount of love in the fandom as luna

Great story!

Love this slow, wicked approach to mind control. I like this pace and Luna's technique.

The wishlist warning list promises lots of good stuff in the next chapters. I'm hooked, can't wait for more

Okay, so, I'ma read this and if there isn't a line that is "Good girls/ pets get rewarded" I'm going to be sad

Welp... I need to go take a cold shower

Contains, or will contain: posthypnotic suggestion, sadism, induced masochism, corruption of morals, (pr)incest, femdom/sub, rape, memory manipulation, bondage, repeated mind-breaking, and lots and lots of tea.

That last one seems like a bit much, you know? All of the other stuff I get, but are you TRYING to get your story taken down?

thumbs up good job

Next chapter!! I love this!

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who's the artist of the pic?

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dimwitdog
https://derpibooru.org/profiles/ThatDimDog

I can't wait to read more!

I'll be honest, the only thing I can think of (besides "wow this is hot") is that it'll be revealed that Tia A) has a thing for Luna and would have been all for this if asked, B) really is overstressed and will lunge at the chance to give up control, C) still feels guilty for banishing her when purifying her was apparently just as easy and would do this to make it up to Luna anyways, or D) some mixture of the above. Preferably D since it offers so many options, although all would remove even the slightest twinge of guilt and let Luna go all out.

This is amazing.
I can't wait to see the slow delicios corruption of Celestia's mind and soul. Take your time Luna. Take your time.

this is fucking amazing