The Cloud

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To a ground-bound pony, a cloud is a collection of rain that hasn’t fallen yet. To Rainbow Dash, it's so much more. It's a place to nap, a launchpad into her mind, and depending on the company, a point of grievous contention.

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Miller Minus

Miller Minus #1 · Jun 15th, 2019 · 6 · ·

Well that was lovely.

Slicer Jen

Slicer Jen #2 · Jun 15th, 2019 · 9 · ·

Some of those drops are tears.

Nethiri

Nethiri #3 · Jun 15th, 2019 · 6 · ·

I don't know what to make of it... but I like it :)

River Babble

River Babble #4 · Jun 16th, 2019 · 4 · ·

Very existential and somewhat confusing. I feel like a deep point was being made but I didn't quite grasp it. Interesting read, though.

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #5 · Jun 16th, 2019 · 5 · ·

Best kill perfection when found. Down that path lies madness.

Stahlseele

Stahlseele #6 · Jun 16th, 2019 · 2 · ·

i am pretty sure i did not understand this as it was meant to be . .
but still, very good, nicely written, no spelling or grammar mistakes i can remember.

FanOfMostEverything

FanOfMostEverything #7 · Jun 19th, 2019 · 3 · ·

“What gives,” Twilight said, “Is I’ve had to water a dozen delicate flower sculptures by hand every day because you won’t make it rain.”

"Which is really difficult, since I have to haul the scultures through the portal first."

Had these not been nationally-recognized and protected pieces of art, she may have grazed over them for a quick snack, too.

They lose more flower sculptures that way...

I'm definitely missing some layers here, but what I did get was a fascinating journey, at once deeply cerebral and undeniably Dash. Excellent work. Thank you for it. But what were you trying to say?

Antiquarian

Antiquarian #8 · Jun 21st, 2019 · 3 · ·

Gonna need to chew on that ending for a while. Thought-provoking read. Like most of the other commenters, I'm not sure I really understood but... is that the point? I just don't know.

MixMassBasher