An injured unicorn finds himself in the Everfree Forest, with no knowledge of who he is or what he is doing there. The only clue he has is a picture of some sort of library within his saddlebag. Meanwhile, a secretive organization known as the Nocturne begins preparing for a long-awaited attack; their greatest concern at the moment is their missing scout...
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I like where this is going, btw, first comment!
Not bad, it has potential. You seem like a fairly decent writer, if you can stick the plot I think this will be a great story.
First comment.
me gusta.
but seriously, good chapter, well written and there was always something going on
SPOILER ALERT This story is actually completely written already. I just don't want to post it all immediately because 1) That would give it a very small window in which to be noticed by people browsing the "latest updates" list, and 2) I'm editing each chapter as I go, adding/subtracting bits and pieces, and I won't do it all at once simply because I'm lazy in that regard.
Cheers!
1063974 Don't worry. I think I did rather well at sticking to the plot, but I'll wait for your further opinion when I finally get around to posting it all.
1079797 Actually, that was in fact the third comment, my friend. Anyway, thanks for the compliment. I see some great fics out here, and I'm not always sure how I stack up.
EDIT: Okay, I guess leafz pegasus was right about that comment. Though it was the third comment for the story, it was also the first for this chapter, so it seems we were just counting with different lists. Sorry!
Ooooohhhhhhh...
whoops.