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Russia at its finest
"Should I keep the chapter names Russian or change them to English"
Keep it that way, it intrigues people really
Not sure if trollficNice "russian" name btw
Вау, нифига ж себе какое русское имя. Мог уже подкатить Ивана или Бориса там, лол.
Oh...
I assume it's not a trollfic.You should certainly put more effort into your writing and editing. Quite a few sentences are ridiculously long, clunky and just not fun to read. Try reading more stuff and notice how more experienced writers do things (I assume English isn't your first languade).
P.S. Если ты русский: в английском предложения строятся совсем не так. Советую сначала почитать побольше, чтобы привыкнуть к языку. Плюс, на YouTube немало видео о простейших ошибках и как их избегать.
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Lots of you pointed out a lot of faults with the story and I don't blame them, I'm not a very good writer nor am I Russian. as for the Russian language in the story, its all google translate which will probably make a few people mad at me for doing such a thing but I will change it to just italic English for Russian if you want me to.
To address the main characters name, I'm really shitty at names if you couldn't tell from the original version of this story (Bringing Anarchy). I will also change the name of the main character if you want as well.
And to clarify, this is not a trollfic.
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You can just rename him Andrey Yasov, it's more or less Russian in origin. I would know, because I'm Russian.
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I have some Russian names in mind but thanks for the suggestion
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I like this :) 👍
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What about vladimir dragomirov? (He was a real person btw https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vladimir_Dragomirov )
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I'll Keep it in mind
Nice to have you back comrade
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I was enjoying the summer and never had time to write the story
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Good on you
I always wanted to learn russian never could though its up there with german and Japanese
Ah yes, the equivalent of:
if you have PTSD... just... get over it
Wasn't he 12 when he entered Equestria? Not 16. Since it's 10 years later, that would make him 21 or 22.