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FireRain


I am fire, I am eternal life. I am FireRain.

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Liam the Human was the happiest when he was dating his soon-to-be wife, Fluttershy, whom he was greatly in love with. During the last months of her life, they were both told that they were going to be parents, but, on the day of the delivery, Fluttershy sadly passed due to complications, leaving Liam to take care of their only child.

Four years after the tragic events that took place at the hospital, a knock sounds at the front door of the cottage that Fluttershy and Liam both called home, and, when he answers it, his world is turned upside down when the pony on the other side happens to be his deceased mistress. With her is another pony bearing a letter and a message.

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Featured! 13/06/2019 😘

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Comments ( 11 )

Good title.

Wow, I like it.

This brought a tear to my eye. It was so deep and heartwrenching it was also so sweet and tender. Please keep up the good work. You just got a new follower!

This felt to me like the first chapter to a story and not a 1-shot.

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I wasn't sure it was a good title at first, but, if it works for ya, then that's good enough for me! :)


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9676929
Glad you think so! It was a bit of a challenge to make it sound convincing and believable, so I'm happy it worked out. Also, thanks for the follow!

That was beautiful. May we have a sequel?

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You forgot to say, ''Please, sir'' at the beginning! And, to answer your query, I don't know. I tend not to write sequels unless the story it is continued from needs some closure or if I have an idea to further it. But I have neither at the moment that I'd like to act upon.

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OK. Nontheless, a truly excellent story. With your permission, I'll post this to anypony who says the fandom is dead.

Very nice work. The only thing I'd change is the troup about the duplicate being perfect but unable to comprehend their mechanical nature. A copy good enough to BE you is good enough to process a body swap. Rick and Morty did this well in "Rick Potion No9" which you should absolutely see if you haven't already. Most stories are notably improved by the characters working through the implications of the life altering swap. Thanks for writing this :twilightsmile:

Like a Black Mirror Episode.

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You have my express permission to do just that, dear sir! In my eyes, this fandom will likely never die out..I'm pretty sure it's the biggest fandom out there at the moment, and it has been ever since the early days! Well, maybe except for stuff like Star Trek, Star Wars and Harry Potter.

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