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Azrael the alicorn


Great fan of mlp, and follower of Princess Luna

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A secret that can't be kept anymore.

A creature bounded to cold and hatred, that hungers from retribution, destined to end the world in ice.

Two mysterious figures, planning behind the curtains.

The fate of the world, on the shoulders of six ponies forced to be heroes.

But victory may not be obtained so easily, this time.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 12 )

If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?

9666507
FrostBound should be voiced by Liam O' Brian. I couldn't think of anyone else to voice him.
He has a voice that can sound both cold and really emotive.

9666507
And for the others ones, I think that gloomy should be voiced by Nolan North, while the Ice Master should be voice by none other than Elijah Wood.

I really need to understand what the heck is wrong with the copy and paste thing on this page.
I had to work manually to fix the last two chapters. I really hope that no other chapter of this story suffered the italic being all over the place.

9800182
So, what are your thoughts on the story?

9800202 I liked it, was intrigued on where this was going until all the blame for this was taken off from Celestia. Kinda ticked me off there, and since I'm a person who hates the reformation route with a passion. The ending was kinda bleh, still the story was enjoyable enough.

9800324
Well, Celestia still had some responsability on the matter, but yeah, the big of the fault as been taken away.
The thing is that I've wanted to explain why Celestia acted so suspiciously in the main show, linking the facts of my other story, the Seal of Death, to it (Gloomy Dusk is, in fact, the son of Princess Luna and Azrael).
But, at the same time, I didn't wanted to make Celestia into a monster. I guess I've tried to bake the cake and eat it too, but it didn't worked as intended to. Sorry to have let you down. :fluttershysad: .
For the ending, I though you would have appreciated the fact that, characters aside, I just stopped the FIM movie to happen, giving a lesson to Tempest Shadow.
I had also planned to make a second ending in which Starlight Glimmer gets what she deserve from Gloomy and his team.

Anyway, glad that you enjoyed the story, sad that the ending didn't satisfied.

9801398 It's fine, you should write whatever makes you feel good and what you like.

9801453
Thanks.
I wanted to ask you what your thoughts on FrostBound/Cryo (The character).

9801697
What about Gloomy Dusk?
What do you think of the son of Azrael and Luna?

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