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Shadow Sweetheart


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It's been Hundreds of years since Spike had his first hoard. After all that time, has he found a way to control his Dragon ways or is he just as greedy?

A quick something I threw together after the idea popped into my head during work. I've never written a fanfic before and I haven't written as story in ages, so, don't hurt me too much.

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Comments ( 13 )

I liked it! For once Spike isn't all sad because of how long he's lived. Good show!

a very nice short, your pacing was decent, though in the future, maybe have a little more detail on your enviroments, but for this it worked well, so no complaints. 5 star and fav

If you make a sequel i will sell my soul to you

#4 · Dec 14th, 2011 · · ·

oh shit. this shits so solid brah... PONYVILLE IS THE HOARD!!! :pinkiecrazy:

I like it cuz it comes down to a point of what a Dragons Hoard is as in this situation its the town he lives in and loves and his to protect from those who seek to harm it...I think I worded that right...:derpyderp2:

I'm not sure how I stumbled across this one, but I'm glad I did. Well written, interesting plot, and I love the idea - Ponyville being Spike's hoard.

It needs to be longer, though! :twilightsmile:

I'm gonna be the voice of dissent here and suggest you take another pass at this. There's quite a few spelling and grammar errors in the story, and they distract from the story you're trying to tell (which could probably stand to be fleshed out more).

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It was never really intended to be fleshed out. Just a quick jot down of an idea I had at work (While at work). I doubt I'll add more to flesh it out, but if you point out any spelling/grammatical errors I'll at least make it look presentable. (As a side not, I use English English, not American English)

Very nice plot, but more could be made of it me thinks.

This is more of an idea than a story. As ideas go, it is very interesting though.

Remember the time that they shared:fluttercry::twilightsmile::raritydespair::pinkiesad2:

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