• Member Since 29th Jul, 2017
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Philly_Cheesesteak


Im just vibing

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Griffonstone can be a very hard place to live... especially for Gallus. So with nothing to look forward to when heading back home, Silverstream invites him to travel with her to Mount Aris and spend the break with her. However unknowingly to Gallus, it will be a vacation that he will never forget.

Cover art by: Sweetcream1
https://www.deviantart.com/sweetcream1/art/silverstream-x-gallus-mlp-740256990

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 6 )

Dude, you need an editor. :facehoof:

9795929
seconding this wholeheartedly
punctuation isn't just for the very ends of sentences you know

Well I enjoyed this. I would read more :twilightsmile:
Cause it would be cute to see the rest of this trip too

9797075
Ditto, still a cute read.

Aw...so cute! Please make more!

Okay I got to say this was a pretty cute story Probably worked on your a couple of sentence there were a couple that was a little bit off and try to put some comma and some period and some of the sentences but other than that I still liked it and I always love the shipping between silverstream and Gallus and it is a pretty interesting backstory for him as well what happened to his parents even though it's a sad one but still keep up the good work

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