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The Blue EM2


Glad to be here at last.

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Suri Polomare has been hiding a secret for a while. A pretty BIG secret. And it concerns one of her friends at school, one whom she's known for a while, but is a little quiet, and utterly clueless as to how Suri feels...

Set within the Railway Adventure universe, but takes place three years before the events of Railway Adventure.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

Short, sweet and cute.
I like!

Yaas i love all the pride month specials uwu

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Thanks! I put a lot of work into it.

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I wasn't even aware it was pride month, but it seems I timed this well!

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Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

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There's far to few Suri's on this site.

Oh. What's the deal with the Credits chapter?

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That's a tradition in my stories. I always list who voices who in my stories.

This Fanfic just boosted my love for Suri Polomare even more <3 :heart:


And for the record everyone.... yes: Suri Polomare is one of my favorite MLP Characters for me. (Both Pony and EG to be exact)

I mean, well, it's not often that I would be one of the rare MLP Fans to have that positive outlook for Suri. And besides.... it does make me a bit special because of that :3

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I wanted to try something where she's not berating Coco. So I thought, why not shipping?

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No, Suri-ously, I've never seen this ship before, OK?

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Glad to clear that up.

SOMEBODY GET ME SOME COFFEE!

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Fair enough.
But wouldn't it be better to put it in the Author's Notes box?

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Maybe. But I've always done it as a separate chapter.

Quick quiz: which British steam locomotive shares a number with the word count on this chapter?

Stanier Black 5 44806, one of the ones which lasted to August 1968 and is now preserved.

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Well spotted. What did you think of the story?

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*Hands you a cup of coffee*

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Oh, thank you, OK?

What did you think of the story?

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I didn't read it, I just saw you ask for coffee, and I gave you a cup. XD

I may read the story later, though.

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Ah, OK. The coffee was great, BTW.

"Quick quiz: which British steam locomotive shares a number with the word count on this chapter?"

Thomas the Tank Engine?

Regardless, I could sense and feel the awkwardness between Suri and Coco in this chapter, so congratulations on that.

Keep up the good work, and good luck on your future stories. :)

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Glad when they said unto me...

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I was really trying to capture the awkwardness of first love, sk I'm glad to hear you think I succeeeded.

This won't be the last we see of them, however.

Suddenly, the school bell went off, and the corridors became full of people moving between lessons. Coco turned around. "Oh no! I'll be late for class, and so will you! Come on! Catch you later!" And Coco vanished into the crowd.

Just what she needed. :ajbemused:

And just like last time, Suri was interrupted by the bell, which was so loud it made it impossible to hear what she was saying. Coco just seemed to brush it off. "See you later!" she called, as she left the room. They didn't see each other next until lunch, which was still three lessons away. Suri groaned in frustration. Her second chance at telling Coco how she felt was blown, and there was no possibility or even chance to try it again until around lunch.

Don't give up yet, you'll get your wish soon enough. :fluttershysad:

Suri took a deep breath, only for Sugarcoat to interrupt. "You're gay and really into Coco Pommel, and have been trying to ask ehr out for ages, but haven't succeeded yet."

ask her out for ages,*

"I know what your gonna say," Suri interrupted, looking at the floor. Her voice shifted to a bad impression of that of of Coco. "Oh, that's messed up, Suri. Oh, you're such a wierdo, liking another girl that way. You're a freak!" Her anger vented, Suri simply crumpled on the floor, unable to say anything else, sobbing quietly.

weirdo*

Coco then continued. "Besides, I've got something of a confession to make myself. I- I've known it for a long time, but I never had the confidence to speak up until now." As Suri stood up, Coco moved in closer, and planted her lips on Suri's.

https://m.

Her mother snorted. "What sort of a question is that?" she asked, incredulously. "You are our daughter. We will never cease to love you. And it doesn't matter if you like girls or not. Love is love, and you can't control it."

That is something I wish all parents were like, accepting their child's decisions on who they love or like. :twilightsmile:

Quick quiz: which British steam locomotive shares a number with the word count on this chapter?

An lms black 5. Correct? :unsuresweetie:
Btw why are the rating disabled?

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