Good authors too, who once knew better words, Now only use four-letter words writing prose. Anything goes. 
Luna has spent her whole life dining in the finest food that the castle chefs could offer. Whenever she ate at a restaurant it always had at least five stars. This all day well with her, until one day, while she was doing her nightly duties she saw a pony very happily dining in things that were below the standards placed on her dining. This piques her interest.
She's made up her mind. She would find this "fast food" and try it for herself.
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While this was fun, there were a LOT of spelling mistakes and wrong words. Could stand to be edited a bit more.
Aside from these (and other) BoneAppleTea moments, as well as some grammar that needs to be fine-tuned, this is one of the most amazing stories I've ever read. You, sir, get a favorite from me. I love it!
Truly, she is enlightened.
Very sweet story. You don't see many "Luna encounters a modern convenience for the first time" these days. This one turned out quite well... though it looks like you blindly accepted every suggestion the spell check gave you. That or you had auto-correct on. Star Saudi the Bearded is an especially glaring example. Be a bit more careful there in the future.
Aside from that, lovely slice of royal life. Thank you for it.
Good story, but get a proofreader.
And now I have a hankering for Culvers or Sonic.
Very nice
A CASTLE full of cream
Kinda surprised Lulu didn't do a suicide at the soda fountain.
Hearthwarming and makes me hunger for McDonalds now.
I was however very distracted by all the grammar mistakes and sudden periods (.) where there should be empty spaces. Perhaps you should get an editor?
I sooo with Luna on the icky mayo!
Me. I just wait outside of the line so that I know what I want.
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How dare you!
- The Lorax
This is the most adorable thing that I have ever read! I love the fast food theme and the sisterly love was well-written!
I really really loved this,Great☆Work!