Dear Denizens of the Other World,
About once a year, strange stuff happens and we have to save Equestria. This time was different, and my friends and I are still not sure we did the right thing.
We are safe and sound, so please do not worry about us.
If you are reading this, then you are probably safe. If you begin noticing symptoms like acute self-consciousness, causal inconsistencies, and existential paranoia, we wish you good luck. We hope you handle it better than we did. Reading our story may help.
Otherwise, I would like to add a personal note. It is both very flattering and a little disturbing that you think of us so much. Take good care of yourselves, and do your best to be there for your friends.
Sincerely,
Twilight Sparkle
Chapters (5)
"If you begin noticing symptoms like acute self-consciousness, causal inconsistencies, and existential paranoia, we wish you good luck. We hope you handle it better than we did."
(I am not joking here, also Trust NO ONE).
I am confused, frightened and intrigued. Possibly not in that order. Please continue.
AWESOME!!!!!
I understand perfectly
Is the fact that I understand and that I have not ceased to exist draw the conclusion that ..... Fail
Um, a chunk of the text seems to have been copied and pasted in near the end, leaving me confused...
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Thank you for the heads-up. I think I got it, and have updated accordingly.
um yes more please and thanks, appreciate it. i'm caught by the promise in here. don't let me down.
Man I love this thing. Confused as all hell and enjoying the shit out of it. Yes that is my precise amount of enjoyment.
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Thank you, and thanks to everyone who has been following this story.
I am very curious about what you will make of the next few chapters. Things are about to get a lot weirder...
Oh don't worry--I love sinister. This is horror with a brain. I love it! And now I want to give Fluttershy all the hugs. No typos to report, eitherA what more can I ask for?
This story is awesome. Also, the Mr. Hands thing made me laugh like crazy. Well done.
That was me, by the way. Too difficult to log in (or type correctly, apparently) from my phone.
This is a thing of wonder. A descent/ascent/transcent into the depths/heights/otherrealm of metafiction. And possibly metametafiction. Also, it seems that Twilight, in her state of neuronal Zen, has become Lauren Faust.
Long story short? Tracking the ever-loving crap out of this thing.
Liked And tracked...That all was a mind trip I should say.
I... I'm not quite sure what I'm reading, nor is it making any sense to me, but it definitely has me intrigued... *sits down to see what happens next*
So many great fics out there, Including this one, languishing in obsurity. Dear gods, Fandom? Why you so Lauding the Badfics and ignoring ones like thisone. On another note, I think I may have accidently disliked the story for a little while, But I think its fixed now if I did
I am intrigued. Your writing certainly resonates, dear.
Also, "
You appear to have lost a 'be' in there. Lucky for you, I have spares.
Evil metafiction that eats stories? It's like you read my 20-year-old mind on what would make the perfect story.
...34-year-old me likes too.
Weirder? Wild!
Loved the topology trick. Loved the toy quote.
Impossibly scary-good. This does what you intended!
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My Little Fanfic: Recommendations Are Magic. Tell friends about good stories, and friends will read them.
So how about that next chapter...?
Is this story going to get an update...?
1685556 the very first scene of FiM: a book opens.
Once upon a time...
I'm actually interested in that "story" that the book made up for Fluttershy. It seemed like it had a deep and dark plot.
And I like my plot deep and dark,sometimes.
This is pretty damn good story ya got here!