Dusk Shine invites Tempest Shadow to stay the night at his crystal castle as his esteemed guest.
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It updated? omg I've been looking forward to this day for a long time
After 2 years of waiting it is finally here now I can die peacefully
worth the wait
Just needs a 5 years later chapter where Dusk is now up to his neck in foals.
Thanks for the chapter!
A mare wearing your shirt after a booty call is like planting a flag at the top of Mt Everest
I'm surprised Luna hasn't made an appearance in this story. Did she finally decided to give up on pursuing Dusk?
This is one of the funniest lines I have read in a long time. It's so great because I can actually imagine Twilight Sparkle saying that in the show. It's so fitting.
Ok I’ll admit I was wrong it didn’t take a year for the next chapter to come out, it took two years.
Dusk never pulls out. Never. Honestly I wouldn't trust this stallion to pull a turkey out of an oven. He is just incapable of pulling out.
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I lost my favorite hoodie this way, to this day I've still not found another like it.
Thanks for concluding this one! Glad to see some of your writing once more
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It makes it all the more awkward when the turkey has a suspicious baby bump when it's time to carve it.
Is it wrong that I completely forgot that this story existed? Oh well, nice to know that since the day dusk became the prince, he learned have a few fetish or two.
I'm sure you're not the only one...
That's not exactly news...
Who would win?
He must be really flustered...
Cute!
Tempest: "One time I want a stallion to not think with his brain, and then this happens..."
: "You have no idea how good he is at missing hints..."
What would she had done if he would have teased her a while longer?
Careful Tempest, he ist still an alicorn stallion in his prime...
For a moment I suspected he would cast a spell to heal her, and only afterwards remembers he already came inside her...
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
And I probably put too many quotes in this comment...
Cute!
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i am kinder curious are you done with this series or is there still more coming down the line?
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I still have more planned, as well as a non-clop comedy sequel featuring Dusk and his many kids.
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Cool i am mostly Following for the story anyways, tho i am wondering how you are Going to handle Luna's part of the Series now, she was trying hard to get in on this line of Dusk life
(a small Edit here Don't ever replay to anything when you have just Gotten out of bed you tend to miss part of what you are talking about, i 100% miss the first part of your replay)
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I wonder what his kids names are?. Also does this include trixie and tempest kids?.
Dang these are great as legitimate stories and porn
An interesting series! need a continuation in which:
a) Luna will send Dusk to the hospital with crushed bones.
b) The life of Dusk after the birth of all foals (including a possible descendant from Tempest).
c) Luna reached Dusk and flew in too. Hereinafter, a description of the events associated with the seven foals.
The author of inspiration and all the best.
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The life of Dusk after the birth of all foals (including a possible descendant from Tempest).
God I hope there's a sequel to this