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Deku Nut


Hi I break every bone in my body nice to meet you! ~(●▪●)~

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One-for-all, The power that is cultivated within one person, and passed onto the next generation, this power, which currently resides within Izuku Midoriya, is transported along with him to a new world, where quirks don't exist, and a new kind of power is introduced to it, this power, is known as magic.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 9 )

Looks great! Can't wait for more!

Oof! Your premise is definitely an interesting one, however, it is extremely rough in terms of grammar and spelling. Not only that, the story starts in such a way that it is almost impossible to tell where it falls in the My Hero Academia timeline. With all that being said, I hate to do this, but I have to give this a thumbs down.

“K-Konnichiwa W-Watashi Yagi I-I-Izuku hajimemashite.”Izuku blurted out. ... … …

This is the the wrong way to say it, it should have been Konichiwa, Watashi Ga Midorya Izuku hajimashite.

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Thanks for the input you two! I'll see what I can do!

Nice. I like. Also. You made Dadmight a thing in this.. and I love you for it

Not bad. Can't wait for more

I mean, it needs more of the things to be fleshed out. It felt rushed and unnatural. It needs more words and contextualization to feel natural to read. I'm hoping that it will improve in the future and is continued.

P.S. This is just a criticism of the work, I don't hate or particularly like the work, I'm just offering a little advice on my end.

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