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One-for-all, The power that is cultivated within one person, and passed onto the next generation, this power, which currently resides within Izuku Midoriya, is transported along with him to a new world, where quirks don't exist, and a new kind of power is introduced to him, this power, is known as magic.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 21 )

Looks great! Can't wait for more!

Oof! Your premise is definitely an interesting one, however, it is extremely rough in terms of grammar and spelling. Not only that, the story starts in such a way that it is almost impossible to tell where it falls in the My Hero Academia timeline. With all that being said, I hate to do this, but I have to give this a thumbs down.

“K-Konnichiwa W-Watashi Yagi I-I-Izuku hajimemashite.”Izuku blurted out. ... … …

This is the the wrong way to say it, it should have been Konichiwa, Watashi Ga Midorya Izuku hajimashite.

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Thanks for the input you two! I'll see what I can do!

Nice. I like. Also. You made Dadmight a thing in this.. and I love you for it

Not bad. Can't wait for more

I mean, it needs more of the things to be fleshed out. It felt rushed and unnatural. It needs more words and contextualization to feel natural to read. I'm hoping that it will improve in the future and is continued.

P.S. This is just a criticism of the work, I don't hate or particularly like the work, I'm just offering a little advice on my end.

Chapters feel a little rushed but nothing a couple hundred words cannot. Overall your story has great potential and I hope Izuku's friends will show up and some relevance to the plot and not just be cameos. Definitely going wait a few more chapters to see how this works out.

i wanna see more of this so pls continue!
Question, who is Deku paired with? i hope its a harem pair!

more please, i wanna see more of our favourite Cinnamon Roll!

Pretty cool. It's good to see more of this

Took a whlie for me to read the MHA manga, but it’s starting to make sense now.

Not sure how My Hero Academia and Ippo are related since the former’s a superhero manga and the latter’s boxing, but I’ll give it a pass since that picture’s pretty cool. Also realized the guy glaring at Luffy is either Vegeta or Gohan.

Oh my gods. All of my yes! PLEASE!
Why is so good?!
The references are bomb and Deku is practically on point.
High praise, mate.

I just got into My Hero Academia and already I want more! More of the anime, and more of this story too!

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KO I am liking this story! Is Izuku going to be paired with one of the girls, I vote for Sunset Shimmer.

Wonder if this story will continue?

What might be in store for Spike?

“Hmmm, I honestly don’t know.” Izuku said to Twilight, before prompting his right-hand underneath his chin. “Although if I were to guess… I would say it might be a way to keep balance or either a side effect from the Portal. But say it was the former? What is another word for balance?: Equilibrium. A state in which opposing forces or influences are balanced. Maybe there is some kind of ‘Entity’ out there that caused you to be like this.” Izuku hypothesized.

If that's the case, I wonder why the hell did this "entity" thought it was funny to reduce Spike to being a pet dog despite he's freaking sapient?

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I think we all know who the top would be in that relationship, though to be fair everyone tops Deku ngl.

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