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Arwhale


All my stories end with the word "gullible." No really, check them out!

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It's been a very long time since I saw a new SkyTrail story on this site. Jolly good show!

Nice, fluffy and hot.
My one thing is that Sky was a bit over eager when he got to Vapour's, but that could just be the way he is.

You liar, I read through this story only to find that it didn't end in 'gullible'!

9943368
They tricked you, eh?

9943437
I swear if you call me gullible I'll strangle someone.

Doesn't need to be you.

9943504
I wasn't! I'm just another user who loves SkyTrail stories.

This ship doesn't get enough love. Thank you for doing exactly that. Great story and keep up the good work my good man :pinkiehappy:

This was possible the most intense, passionate, and still light-hearted Clopfic I've ever read. Not only that, but the characters were as on point as I have seen them written as well... I don't think you've got any reason to worry about being rusty, my good lad. This got featured for a bloody good reason, my congratulations to you, well done, Mr. Arwhale.

Sigh... yet another blow, suck and fuck fic. Could these stories get any more cliche? I mean I don’t even bother reading the smut because it’s just so boring and reads like any other. Why is it that every time they have to blow the guy then said guy sucks her cunt then they fuck? Come on people change it up a little bit!

9943752

Sigh... yet another blow, suck and fuck fic.

Hm. Didn't realize there was a genre for it.

But alas, she had taken the first sip. The coast was clear, surely? .

Just because she took the first sip doesn't mean nothing happened.


Well! This fic was... A treat (late holiday reference). I'll admit, I skipped over a lot of the clip to reach the end, but my favorite part was the foreplay and teasing. I can see Vapor pulling off more risque tricks in the future, like showing up to practice with lingerie under her uniform, then invading the stallions locker room when she's sure no other stallions are around after the drills are over.

9943752
It's a rare ship, and it's well written. That is why it has so much popularity.

Besides, do you really want to make Vapour cry?

9943764
Read enough of these and you can easily see the trends. About the only part I didn’t see was them jamming their tongues into each other’s mouth.

9943856
If by well written you mean cliche then yes you are absolutely correct in that observation.

Though I will agree it is a rare ship that I think these two would be perfectly matched. Although I believe sex between them would be more awkward and embarrassing at times due to vapors demure nature and sky’s ignorance.

9943861
Yeah. I never got the tongue thing.

9943863
Now there's an idea for a story...

9943752
Crazy idea, but this might just solve your problem:

Write your own clopfic.

There's another couple that becoming popular as of late.

9944956
And so it should. These two are perfect for each other.

jxj

Man, that was really good. It's good to see you writing again, and congrats on the feature.

9944907
When did I said it was my problem? I was merely making an observation. But thanks for the sarcasm anyway.

9945410
Well, if everybody is being fair, you were sarcastic first. :rainbowlaugh:

So wish these two were used more. They were such a cute couple.

There should be more stories for this ship.

Vapor’s whole body jolted like it had been zapped with a stormcloud. Much to Sky’s delight, she squeaked more loudly than he had ever heard her before as he buried his muzzle underneath her tail, which flagged higher than Celestia’s banners over the Canterlot parapets. Vapor Trail’s hips bucked over and over as her vision went white, and with a howl of ecstasy, she splayed her back hooves and came over and over again, barely needing a moment before her bliss came to its peak.

all that from a tongue ?

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