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StoryPow
Long time writer of cruddy stories I have kept on my computer to myself. Decided to try posting and sharing them.
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Why isn't there an OC tag?
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Oh my bad, I honestly didn't make the connection that any human character is a OC.
So to answer, human error lol
If the main OCs in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
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Non: More of a North Eastern accent, like think rural New York or New Hampshire.
Leo: Has a deeper voice, best way I could describe it would be similar to the kind of voice Johhny from the cobra Kai show sounds.
I think the only other OC is Brandywine, and I think of her voice is closer to Jenny Lewis. Like when she was younger.
Edit: because Cherry finally appeared lol.
She would sound alot like One of Erica Lindbeck‘s voices. Probably the best example is jericho from SDS.
isekai through suicide, its been too long between updates so don't know if it was hinted. Need to reread the other parts.
what are these secrets he's keeping, she literally dives into his dreams without his consent almost whenever he goes to sleep. Hard to keep a secret or withhold info when you don't have a choice to prevent such privacy invasion.
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In my mind science and magic are two very different things. What Luna did Is closer to interrogation, she can get the answers, but at only at the speed a memory can play out. And up until this point she just was doing her job, trying to stop nightmares. Only after her sisters request did she check to see if he was lying in anyway.
Will this story have any m/f sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?
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Eventually yes, there will be sex scenes. When they come up I plan on putting (clop) like that next to the title. So if someone wanted to skip it they can.
Or if they were a degenerate like me ‘revisit’ a favorite scene
well looks like everything is going to shit for leo, anyone want to try to prove to me that this trial was not just an excuse to shame leo for trying to move on from his past.
They while they physically said that he wasn't a threat, their actions clearly view him as a threat. They even alerted the ponies of ponyville of Leo's past which destroyed him socially in a small town like ponyville.
Also nice of Non to bring up going home in front of his wife rainbow_dash, what a great sample of loyalty there.
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I Honestly love your attention to detail!
And don’t worry the next chapters will address those very things!
I’ll be honest, Nons reaction was partially there so I could write more about the two of them.
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on stories I like I tend to try to pick up any details that could help me try to predict how things are going to go.
I'm sure there are things I missed, like the fact that cherry is also dropping hints that she likes Leo to the point even the other patrons can see it.
im surprised he even wanted to come back.
leo rocking earth pony strength and stamina to be able to go a whole night a in a creepy forest beating up anything that gets in his way and not even tired out the next morning. Also surprised Twilight didn't teach him how to read, sounds like its something she would do besides countless tests.
On another note, did Non go after the ship He's not a main character so there's a chance it won't end well for him. Rainbow_dash might not be my best pony, more like a Rain-bro that I wish her well in her endeavors including her relationships.
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Twilight didn't notice because most IQ tests are based off pattern, memory and problem solving. Which doesn’t always require written stuff.
Yeah sorry if that wasn’t clear. And there will be more about whats going on with Non in the next chapter. But for that day he was just at work.
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;)
Until I see a pov chapter from Non, I do not trust his judgement as well as Celestia.
If his resolve was or is going to be tested by seeing a way home, I wouldn't like the results if I don't know more about him and Rainbow's relationship other than they have sex.
If darkest dungeon has taught me anything, if someone's resolve is tested and they happen to fail then bad things happen with a slight chance of death.
wait , so they want him to spend a month or two to go get the ship but won't pay for expenses or any other fees that might come up?
Even debating if Leo would take it since he has that mentality or paying back what he owes. The longer they wait the more other creatures are going to find that ship, my top pick would be changelings since they have an actual spy network due to their skills.
I'm on the fence with this Twilight, because Non was here to help she and her friends hasn't gone through any hardships to toughen them up or the fact that Leo's voice getting loud was enough to scare her has me wondering about their status as friends unless they don't yell in this equestria.
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The wincing is more because they don't like the yelling vs them not being able to handle it. At this point, they would be in the middle of season 2-ish. So they have been trough a bit, but not alot. Hope that clears it up a bit.
Also, they are paying to get him there, but things like clothes, food and the like are on him. Remember he's practically destitute, so having to buy extra anything is difficult atm.
The store is pretty good you should a store where Spike ends up in the Star Wars Universe becomes Darth Vader's apprentice with Starkiller
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not gunna lie, this comment got me to chuckle. And if your serious why not give it a try yourself? every-pone can find an audience here.
I don't know how to feel about these chapters, so not going to comment on them other than feel sorry for Leo for having to hear it.
As the notes, as long as you don't suddenly decide to cancel the story; I'm willing to wait for chapters as Leo's quite a relatable character who knows he fucked up and is trying to redeem himself. Its just a shame that majority of these ponies aren't that forgiving towards him like to do some shady shit like diving into someone's dreams without permission or forcing a human's memories to be read to a kangaroo court kinda.
So are they going to forget that he doesn't know how to read their language?
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glad to hear your here to (hopefully) see it to the end. :) and even I have no plans to cancel. I just gotta hope i can muster the energy to finish it. and i hate it when a story gets deleted bc the writer doesn't wanna finish the story, so that is def not gonna happen.
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Not quite sure what your referring to? as of now a few pones know Leo can't read. it'll come up a few times i think? if my outline ends up being the full direction the story goes it'll come up at least once