What a wonderfully fucked up life (rewrite)
written by Mr_Jekyll_and_Dr_Hyde
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too short mate 🙁
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i agree too short :/
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Thanks for the input next will b longer
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thx
This needs more chapters. Loving Jekyll though.
I love this, however I think you may need an editor or something to help fix minor grammar mistakes and add a bit more detail to a few sentences, if need be I can help ya, if your interested just private message me about it
That's some interesting trends you ponies got their.
alright. i smell bad self insert. now i'm no fucking good when it comes to writing. but how do you get sentence structure wrong? and along with that the pacing is already way off. and the cherry on top is the aggressive lack of depth. you have managed to write 2 chapters without so much as a drop of character. or character development. this is not the 'funny' bad, or the 'ironic' bad its the not worth reading bad. is fixing these glaring issues not the point of a rewrite? also Futa is gay.