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Turtlehaus


I enjoy writing. If I think of anything clever to say I'll update this.

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This story is a sequel to The Phoenix King


The Winter Solstice is fast approaching. A celebration that the Kingdom of the Frozen North holds most dear, marked by festivals and rituals that honor the spirits that are believed to inhabit the Northern Lights. Only this year, it will be Princess Sapphire's turn to commune with the spirits, and have the ancient power of the Frozen North passed down to her through the Great Caribou spirit.

A prince by the name of Lord Acrylic Snowfall from Southern Ice Kingdom has come to ask for Lady Sapphire's hoof in marriage that would unite the two Kingdoms of ice and snow. Yet, something about this new colt has lit a fire under Smolder, but struggles to understand the feelings he has for Princess Sapphire and how it differs from the ones he has for Tea Herbal.

Smolder will have to come to terms with his feelings quickly, as a new evil lurks within the cold of the North, a dark force that desires this ancient power of the Great Caribou. For if this power were to fall into the wrong hooves... it could bring all of Equestria into a second ice age.

Editor: EverfreePony

EverfreePony was generous enough to provide me with a very in depth review, grammatical corrections, structure, pacing, and plethora of other suggestions that have not only improved this first chapter, but also granted me the chance to learn a great deal more about my own writing. You have my gratitude.

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 18 )

Oooh, it's back! I was wondering where you went, got a bit worried, but I'm glad to see this series return!

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Thank you. I got sidetracked with a lot of things, but I spent much of my free time drafting this story. I hope it lives up to expectations.

Dang, some great emotional scenes in this chapter! Shame this story is so low in views.

And I'm interested how this Love Triangle will play out. :trollestia:

Should probably trust the expert on rocks to help you with that game!

And hmmm... What happened with Tea?

literaly thought off this of smolder wold and got happy supries to se that you have made a new chapter of smolders adventsure loves it

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I was honestly confused about how the story commented on itself and laughed realizing it was another author's username. I assure you that it is just the title and that it doesn't lend any credence to your own stories or persona.

smolder and shaphire are so cute i'm dying inside and keep up the great exselent work man can't wait when the trubel start brewing up again poor smolder

Took me a while to read this chapter, but got around to it eventually :twilightsmile:

As always, the relationship between our two favorite ponies continues, wonder where all this'll go

its alive!!!!! and damn from flame to magma ponies? whats next lightning? but poor smolder cant get 1 day to relax! XD

glad to see a update! been a while and that paart with the magma ponies was helarius! poor smolder cant catch a break

Wow, had completely forgotten about this story, glad to see it return!

Here's to hoping for an update someday

its alive! and damn about time

awww this was a bitter sweet moment and i still remeber the jurney smolder been though and how his father saved him ones again how he loved his sons even tho he had to keep up the facade off evil tyrant king just to keep them away from the dragons evil grasp and coruption

and we are aware a bit off the story off his past but this is going to be a intresting one to read

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