Where headcanon becomes absurd and canon absurder
Element Aura never knew his real parents. He’s also ran from foster homes all around Equestria. One day he ends up In ponyville, and discovers something that will change his life forever.
Currently being rewritten: here’s the link to Elemental! (Remastered)
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You've commited two cardinal sins right off the bat. The cover art screams Pony Creator, and that is generally viewed as a waste of everything.
And then there is the fact that the story doesn't need to have this many chapters. It screams incompetent writing when you make them this short.
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Sorry I was lazy when writing this, I’ll try making the sequel longer, and I’ll also try drawing the cover. I may not even use a cover, I’m sure you see why
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Alright I’ll take this into account when writing the sequel. Also if you read the other story a I mentioned, the first few chapters have the same problem.
This could be better.
Though, you could probably go back and instead of having fifteen short chapters you could merge two separate chapters together to make one chapter?
It would be shortened down to seven chapters in total.
Also.. I do recommend getting a commissioned cover or not having a cover at all, most readers dont like pony creator.
The story overall could've been done differently,ill leave a like on this story because it caught my interest in the "new tab".Also if you do write a sequel,please think it out beforehand.
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Ok thanks, I’m new to this whole writing thing so I was sure how long the chapters should be or even if I should’ve had that many chapters. I guess just depends on what kinda story you’re writing.
why do i get a Shazam vibe
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Kinda what the story’s based off of
9698291
thank you for confirming that and isn't twilight already the element of magic
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The element types aren’t (in my opinion) the same in this story, Twilights element is the Element Of Harmony, Element Auras element is more like a power element like Fire, or Water
9698381
so two different elements of magic. one that binds friendship, and one that represents general magic got it.
9698588
Yeah, exactly. :)
9699017
okay which one is more powerful or is one an off shoot of the other
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They’re on the same level of strength, just in different categories.
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ok
this story feels a little rushed