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This is the pairing I was looking for the most during this contest! I'll have fun reading this **
Aggressive in their species, aren't they? ... I mean, I suppose that makes sense. Thorax was 'different than all the others' and he was about as simpering as they come before the upgrade.
Uh. Um. Wow I uh... *clears throat*
Sweet brotherly love, batbug. That was really incredible. From start to end, each scene titillated while adding value and emotional depth to the story. Funny, warm, and deliciously smutty is a hard trifecta to pull off, but this does it with seeming ease.
How dare you take a line like that and make it sexy? 🤣
This was really, really well-written. Watersports is usually a deal-breaker for me, but it was such a small part and the rest of the story was wonderful enough that I'd have done myself a disservice.
P.S. I loved Spike in this.
This is exactly what I wanted from this contest.
That cover image is too perfect
God-DAMN
Hot diggity damn, this was damn diggity hot. All the love and cute romancey bits were perfect.
This was good. I was genuinely getting irritated at Pharynx, which is precisely what the prose should be doing..
Though I had a strange moment where, after all that time building up an annoyance for Pharynx, I actually kinda wanted Thorax to punch him in the dick and toss him out one last time at the end.
But then there wouldn't be much of an incest story, eh?
This was very well-written, and entertaining to read. The porn was great, of course, as was the not-porn. I really liked the way you wrote everyone, but especially Spike.
Speaking of, Spike and Pharanx is a pairing I’ve never seen before, and if you were writing it, I’d be very interested in a story like that.
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I want to cosign that, I, too, would be interested in seeing a Spike and Pharanx pairing too
Yes, I am here for post-sex cuddly Thorax.
One of the better pieces of Thorynx I've seen on this site, for sure. Pharynx felt a little outlandish at times but that's to be expected with the comedy and porn so, it's not really a complaint. Maybe he really is just in heat.
A fun piece! Spike was great.
That would make perfect sense, too. A color-blind individual would have a devil of a time telling ponies apart, unless they took the time to memorise cutie marks (which Ember doesn't do either, but okay)
I almost mistook that for a knife as in I assumed he was going backstab his brother.
That line…you sir, are a genius.
This alone is enough to make me Read this.
And of course, this is still an awesome Read!