Rainbow Dash has been so busy recently she's hardly been around and some of her friends are beginning to feel the tension on their relationship with her, will she be able to patch things up with the others or maybe create something even stronger. Is it as her father says just one big distraction or is there more to life than soccer. Follow the mane 7 on their slice of life adventure, through the mundane and the crazy forming stronger bonds as they cut their own paths through life.
The fic will be heavily Flutterdash based but will include other ships that will be given attention in the background or in their own chapter if something big happens
All chapter are currently at version 2 meaning if you've read it before and thought it was poorly written, so did I when I read it, so I'd recommend giving it a second glance
Interesting so far definitely wanna see where this is going.
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I hope it lives up to your expectations
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There shall be more to come
So, am I allowed to put this to rarijack and flutterdash folders?
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Yeah they go in there, I'll spoil that much
I'll check it out, but you might wanna think about capitalizing the title and chapter names.
Sci-Twi needs a hyphon.
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Ooh thank ya
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No probs.
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I suppose it wouldn't hurt
You might want to think about putting in capital letters at the beginning of speech sentences and names.
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I generally do try to do that if there are any mistakes then I do apologise it would have slipped through when I was checking it over after writing it
But thanks for letting me know I'll go over it again to check it all and be more careful in future
Lovin' the fic so far! I've always absolutely adored the whole; Fluttershy having a crush on an unaware Dash, and Applejack being Rarity's "knight in shining.....something." Anyways, I got one question if you don't mind answering; if it spoils something than feel free to not answer, but who's the MAIN focus of the story? I noticed it kind of jumps, but Fluttershy and Dash seem to be more at the center to far. Just curious, no real critique, love the fic! Thx and hope to see more soon!
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It's more than likely gonna centre more and more around flutters and dash I just wanted to try and lay some ground work and throw all my ideas down
Rainbow dash dad will act as a barrier for rainbow dash and her friends (especially Fluttershy) my only hope is that rainbow dash dad would learn to let her daughter go.
Correct me if I’m wrong.
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Well, your first part will be answered in the next chapter, the last part you will have to wait and see
Poor fluttershy
Hey just making an update for you all I rather clumsily lost the file for the newest chapter two weeks ago and have been rewriting it, it's all done and I'm just checking over to make sure it's written as well as I can, I hope you'll like it and I'm sorry for the delay I promise I'll make it up to you
Why is there an anthro tag? My Little Pony isn't anthro.
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Its the equestria girls sort of universe meaning they are humans if the tags inappropriate I apologise and I'll remove it asap
I was pulled in by the FlutterDash, and I'm sticking around for the potential SunLight :D. Stories been great so far. Can't wait to see where it goes from here!!
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Aww thank you so much it means so much to hear you're enjoying it , makes me wanna improve on my skills so I can write it even better for you all
This chapter was pretty great. Loving this story so far, and can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Aww thank you so much, I'm so glad you like it.
Glad to see you're back. The SunLight stuff was too cute, and it's nice to see Dash finally feeling a flutter for Fluttershy. Amazing chapter like always. Can't wait to see what comes next!!
hilarious!!!!
I would like to see new chapters