Rarity, Fluttershy, and Big Macintosh spend a day at the spa.
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A nice little slice of life tale, and your grammar is refreshingly good. I too have thought about how Rarity discovering Big Mac for the Ponytones would make for a good story, and it was nice to see a bit of that reflected upon here in the form of a conversation on past events.
I think it's a little odd for two single mares to be having a spa appointment with an attached male friend, or even an unattached one. But this was an Everyone one-shot, so the focus was more on friends enjoying an outing, rather than any awkwardness being in a situation like that might make me feel personally.
Anyways, thank you for sharing.
A wonderful slice of life story, that could be done in a 22 minute segment. For me, this is now canon.