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Darth Severus
Brony, Star Wars nut, Former Marine, BA in English, minor in creative writing, OCD and on the Autistic Spectrum
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Nice chapter maybe next they go to their parents bedroom sense they are not home
I like the ship, but I think the dialogue to stand to be less crude and the framing to be more than paper thin.
And the descriptions less absurd. Ponies are much smaller than people, but you've given this teen a dick more than twice as long and wide as an average adult human penis.
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Enjoy genital mutation.
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Huh? If you're talking about circumcision, I don't see how that's relevant, (especially when talking about pony penises) and I'm against the practice anyway.
In the first study I could find on Google, newborn circumcision reduces the length of the eventual adult penis by less than a centimetre. The average erect penis size is less than 14 centimetres; certainly nothing like the 14 inches Pound Cake is allegedly sporting here. And the diameter of 3 inches? My forearm has about that diameter.
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Bro I said MUTATION! Not MUTILATION! Look correctly at my comment before replying.
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Then again, if you really, REALLY want to know how big Pound's dick looks like in real life, use your arm as a scale.
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Genital mutilation is a term I've seen multiple times. Genital mutation is not. I don't always look at every letter when quickly reading something.
I don't enjoy genital mutation either. I like to read about all people/ponies involved enjoying themselves, and I can't believe that's happening when Pumpkin is getting impaled on something the size of her leg and Pound must surely have low blood pressure in the rest of his body in order to direct it to his fifth leg.
If it was being done for laughs (as seen from authors like Bendy) then I could deal with it; but no, this was written to titillate.
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You are aware that in real life, horse cocks are MUCH bigger than human cocks? I realize now that even compared to a real horse cock, that Pound's cock is too big
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Horse, yes. But pony?
I couldn't find much from a quick google, but I did find a fan had done the analysis for me years ago: https://www.reddit.com/r/mlpmature/comments/yr36a/pony_penis_sizes/
Their analysis put an adult pony penis at 7 inches. Pound here is not an adult, but you did want him to be impressively large in Pumpkin's eyes, so 7 or 8 would be reasonable.
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Now, let's not get too technical into this. Let's just agree that Pound's cock is "bigger than average" instead of 14 inches long and 3 inches wide.