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Care to tell me more about DarkRyu's contest?
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More information can be found if you check the "Incest is Wincest" group! <3
Hey, I'm one of the contest judges. Wanted to leave my notes here if you care to read them. These aren't my final thoughts on your story's place in the contest, but more from an editorial point of view.
Story:
Grammar/Mechanics:
Incest Theme:
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Wow, thanks a ton for these critiques! I'll definitely make some edits after reading these.
I do plan to enter another story, and these will definitely be taken into the current editing of that story!
Are you going do to more facesitting fics