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Abadawhaaaaat? Uncle? That's a new one.
Woohoo, two updates in a day. (nevermind how short one was.)
I never knew Celestia was such a huge bitch. Neat!
Oh, and you got a bit of an italics problem there.
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Thanks, I fixed it.
MAKE THEM LONGER !!!
...
Wait, is the Princess loosing her colors ?
“The contrast in size makes thine flank appear quite copious,"
Burn.
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A magic migraine mixed with a concussion makes anypony grumpy. Hopefully, I conveyed her foggy and inattentive POV mixed with agony that she couldn't show. Since she lost to Chrysalis any sign of weakness would seriously harm her remaining authority.
Say what?
It's a very interesting story.
And I'll keep reading the updated chapters.
Nice try.
Interesting... very interesting. Could the power of the Sun be moving to a new holder? IIRC, Celestia was the original holder of the Elements of Harmony; now the Elements have new Bearers, possibly her other powers must be handed over too. If so, it is something that I'm sure will have consequences, severe consequences, for the Mane 6.
wow
I think you meant mortality. Other than that, nice chapter!
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thanks for the typo catch, fixed now.
... Really? Thousands of years of politicking, and _that_ is how she breaks the news? She must still be in shock - there is no way that _that_ came from the mind of a perfectly rational Celestia.
I assure you there would be some more surprise in my reaction most of the time, but apparently it turned 2am a while ago, so fatigue is somewhat suppressing that.
Anyway, having managed to catch up in one sitting, I now look forward to seeing more. But first - sleep.
Luna was wearing that smile again.
Wow.. A strong ending of this chapter..
Athough I don't know what is "that" smile exactly..
I'll keep reading!
I wonder if Luna has been waiting... maybe for a millennia... for all of Celestia's sins (mostly of omission or good intentions leading you-know-where) to come home to roost.
Did *not* expect that tag set from that description. TO THE WATCH LATER PILE!
Haha, I was like that the first time I was anaesthetized- apparently I was ranting on about coconuts feraluprising.com/images/smilies/Trollicons.GIF/Miscellaneous-TrueStory.gif
Anyway, this is getting veeeeeeeery interesting...
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Anyone who's had to go through a root canal and getting a crown should find this chapter familiar. For those of you who are not familiar with this procedure, keep brushing.
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Colgate approves
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nice story
"He was the black sheep of the family."
Ba Dum Tss!
The bit with the doctor at the beginning had me smirking. I love how quick you put out these chapters!
hahahahaha flower, flour I get it (I think same pronunciation?) another lovely chapter with a painful cliff hanger. However I know the next chapter would be released in two days or so so I can wait
I checked chapter3-Luna again.
That smile may be a "I'm going to make a joke" smile or some cruel or grim smile.
Both smile in this situation makes me chilly.
Waiting for next chapter ^^
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It is intended to be the "I made a jest" smile. Should I change it to make it clearer?
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You mean "That" smile which Luna wear at the end of chapter4-Celestia?
Thanks. You don't need to change.
I just wondered what kind of smile she wear when she start to tell Twilight "black history".
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Faved for Grogar. Can't wait for more.
People always talking about being groggy/acting silly whatever while under anaesthesia but nothing like that happened when I got my wisdom teeth out. I was just, out like a light and a bit foggy headed(and sore) when I woke up.
*continues reading*
Probably the best bit of exposition in this story so far. Twilight is looking back at a savage time of kill-or-be-killed, enslave-or-be-enslaved with a modern pony's refined morality, something that simply did not apply and had no relevance back then.
Apparently, Celestia doesn't see the need to explain the theory of the closed-loop universe to Twilight Sparkle at this point.
So, it appears that the working theory is that Chrysylis damaged Celestia's horn during their duel? It's possible and it would certainly explain the dysfunction of her magic as Unicorns and Alicorns use their horns the way human mages in the Potterverse use wands - as power channels and foci. However, that wouldn't explain Celestia's certainty that she is no longer divine in nature. That could only happen if that power had been given to someone else and...
And I really think that the time has come for someone to talk to Discord about his discoveries.
Cool stories, Celly. Tell them again?
This should be "Luna and I." I'm normally not too picky about this sort of thing, but this is the second time that I've seen Princess Celestia of all ponies say something like this.
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Fixed, thanks for the catch.
1213653 Wow that was fast
To be honest, when I read the word gobsmacked, i laughed.
I never heard the word before and it just made me laugh.
Well fuck... Celestia is going to die
Nice chapter :D
That cow plot idea is blowing my mind
I really like the "World's Myths and Fantasies" angle you're taking with this.
And look forward to the next installment of your tale!
i hope luna and twilight's relationship gets fixed
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Hur Hur Hur, he said cow plot.
Ye gods, my jokes are as bad as Luna's
My eye has been captured.
This is going to be good, alright.
Before i read this what are the pairings?
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Pairings? As in shipping? There is some light Twiluna, no clop.
Wow!
Really good chapter.
The dialog between Twilight and Luna is pretty sad..
And the reaction of Luna.. The words are awesome. (and a bit shock)
Interesting fiction, GJ!
Incoming night court shit storm in 3... 2... 1...
The background settings are really interesting and legit.
Luna rumbled. ”Do you dare call modern Equestria an empire? I have CO-RULED an empire! I have ORDERED my country to spread! I have ORDERED legions to march, and fly, and witch-leap! I have ORDERED non-ponies enslaved or slaughtered! I have LAUGHED on battlefields and DRUNK to massacres! Thanks to the infinite wisdom gained through ages by my sister Celestia, Equestria is no longer an empire! We are also no longer as stupid and cruel and vain as we were in your beloved good old times, King Ukko!”
From chapter 6 of a nice advanture fiction "Under the Northern Lights"
Back to this fiction, it looks like Luna need to make it up for what they did herself (That's a good and mercy situation is the past but may be a cruel thing in the present).
However, it will be interesting for us to read what will happen.
For Equestria, Celestia was sick, the sunlight was limited. And Luna wanted to free slaves. Many ponies may be scared.
For Luna, she changed a form. Not a cutie young innocent sister but a stronger ruler.
For Twilight, she need to find a way to save her mentor.
This is an interesting story. Love and fav. GJ!
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Thanks a ton, I always look forward to your comments. It's great to know that folks are really liking this story,
derp, derp, derp derpy derp
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Well, maybe not all the comments are constructive.