Sorry but what you have done to AJ is too much. She would not leave Applebloom.

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tbh, i had to do it but if u ever read the story ever again, just make sure to read EP9 and 10

still, thanks for reading these chapters

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The premise is good, bit iffy on what happen to most of the alicorns. But AJ just kills this story for me. I just can't see her being like Mensk. Another pony should have been chosen for that role.

Also note. Ever make another story i will give it a try. I judge each story on its own not who writes it.