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A letter

Fluttershy receives a letter from her oldest and best friend.

Well, it is the first time for me to write fan-fic! It is so difficult!! But I do enjoy it!
And I am not that good in English, there are many mistakes, and it would be great if you could help me to find them!
Anyway, Hoping you like it.......

And it is totally Fluttercord

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TheAncientPolitzanian

TheAncientPolitzanian #1 · Apr 18th, 2019 · · ·

Like you said there'd be, there were definitely grammatical errors (I'll admit I lost count of how many), but underneath all of that was a nice little story. If you're worried about your grammar, I'd suggest finding an English-speaking user who's willing to proofread your stories for you.

Nevertheless, have a Thumbs Up!

sadistjolt

sadistjolt #2 · Apr 19th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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I am so sorry for my mistakes influence your readingand i am so pleasure you give me a thumbs!!
Thank u very much!

sadistjolt

sadistjolt #3 · Apr 19th, 2019 · · ·

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OH MY!!!
I will be so happy if you would like to help me to proofread and edit my fan-fic!!
How should i connect you? And, i want to paint a head painting for you as repay if you don't mind!

OhHoney

OhHoney #4 · Nov 20th, 2019 · · ·

MY HEART IS BROKEN This was so wonderfully atmospheric. Like, it was so confusing and almost incomprehensible at times, but it was clearly deliberately so and it made the fic so much more gripping and raw.