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Marezinger Z


Always looking to learn and enhance my craft as well as share in the fandom fun.

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Mr. Fetlock frequents the art auctions of Canterlot and his latest acquisition proves to be more than just paint and canvas.

Story written for the Nightmare Night in April contest hosted by RockstarRaccoon.
Write Off-Nightmare Night in April

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SCP XXXX is a painting that depicts a tree with a hangstallion's noose...

This should really have the Death and Dark tags...although, do they require a Teen rating? It's very mild stuff, but it might technically need to be teen, especially with the description of the monster.

Anyways, it was rather predictable and felt cheesy and generic. Well-written, just...not original territory in the slightest and could've done with a smarter main character.

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I was up in the air with the tag situation too, if anyone else brings it up I'll go ahead and re-tag the story. Appreciate the honest input.

Ooooo interesting heehee

It was a very suspensful read with great pacing and imagery, I'm glad I read this in the middle of the day XD great job!

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Thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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Lol, you're right. This has pony SCP written all over it. If that already isn't a thing then it needs to be.

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You should go for SCP/Foundation like stories if you wish.

I've done it but I don't use SCP, I use Anomalous Object(AO).

Nicely done! Reminiscent of an M.R. James story I remember.

Hey there! I did a reading of this story on my YouTube channel, I'll leave a link if you want to check it out. Sorry I didn't let you know sooner.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0KF4G6jGCEQ&t=434s

Oh my gosh - this is terrifying! One of the best Horror/Dark stories I've ever read! Nice work on this one, you wrote a fantastic story.
There were a few confusing/sped up moments, but nothing a quick reread can't fix.

Awesomely creepy that the painting updates itself with each new victim. Love cursed item stories.

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There is definitely something eerie about paranormal objects because you can't really combat them directly; and usually by the time you realize what's happening it's already too late. They're some of my favorite too.

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