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A down-on-his-luck brony stumbles upon an impossible sight: Nightmare Moon, standing on a Los Angeles sidewalk! She makes him an even more impossible offer: join her in her conquest of Earth! Join Nightmare Moon and her new minion as they first try (and sometimes fail) to take over Southern California, with their eventual goal of World Conquest!

This story is the opposite of a 'Human in Equestria' story, this is a Pony on Earth story. Our Earth. There will be action, there will be comedy, and a little shipping mixed in here and there. No clop. The brony protagonist will learn that there are heavy consequences to pay if you want to try and fulfill your fantasies with an Equestrian villain.

Cover art by BegasusTiuBe.

Note: Story is 100% complete. New chapters post once a week, on every Sunday.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 9 )

Well this could be an interesting story, I think the set up is good, with the guy too drunk to realize that this was real when he kissed NMM for real and sort of reasonably refused sense she didn't had the cash for him to keep his apartment. I can't wait to see how she will solve that idea, my best guess would be mind control of some sort or steals money. I wonder what powers he will be allowed to help her in her quest to conquer the world like that, he doesn't sound like the sharpest tool around so I don't think hacking is his thing. my best guess would be that NMM is going to build up a lot of capital before to help finance her conquest before doing anything big yet. I hope there will be human turn ponies in this once sense they are my favored kind of stories. I will keep an eye on this story.

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Thank you for your compliments. Though I must disappoint you as well, no humans turn into ponies in this story. Nor do the ponies turn human or into anthros. All ponies in this story are normal Equestrian ponies.

I like how you're thinking about what's going to happen next in the story, although I went in a different direction. I don't want to give away any spoilers, but you will find out a lot more in the next chapter.

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Oh well too bad, will see if the story stands enough on ti's own without that then.

Bonus chapter for everyone! I will still post a new chapter on Sunday.

okay great there is some transformation. I think the writing was pretty solid, if I didn't know she was so clueless and had only meet NMM just a few hours prier, I would have thought that she brainwash his friends or hex the guy for everyone to turn his back on him. keep it up.

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Strange. Stats for the story show 4 positive votes and 1 negative even though only 3 positive votes are showing on the home page. Maybe yours is the one 'missing' vote? This presumes you're upvoting, of course.

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Click on the thumbs up and NOTHING.....

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Well, I now see 3 upvotes and one of them is today. Maybe that's you? And thanks much for the upvote!

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