The world is sent into turmoil as a series of devastating upheavals causes widespread panic across the various kingdoms.
Erebus, a being older than Equestria itself, has reemerged on the world, intent on exacting revenge upon the ancient land's ruling princesses for reasons unknown.
The only thing standing between the old god of destruction and the decimation of a kingdom are six friends, two princesses, a griffon, and the power held within an ancient brass artifact of an age gone by...
Chapters (2)
And so it begins...
This will be quite a project for me, depending the reception. I already know how it'll go - just have to put finger to keyboard and make with the tappy-tappy
Quick note; Discord is not tagged because he'll only appear in the opening flashback and maybe for one scene later on, but that's it. In terms of plot, he's unimportant. Besides, the ponies will have ENOUGH to deal with without him screwing things up.
And Gilda, well... she'll pop up in Chapter 1. I promise I didn't lie!
Constructive criticism is welcome and encouraged. UNconstructive criticism will be promptly rainboom'ed
I hope Gilda will be given more development than just 'asshole'.
Otherwise, good fic.
You might want to space out the paragraphs with one more enter, 'cause right now it's looking like a wall of text.
Hmmmm....
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1050582 I'm planning to try.
And thanks for the tip; I'll try to fix it for the next one. This is my first fic, so I'm still working out the kinks
Nice... I'm going to recommend this to all of my fellow bronies as soon as possible. Great Work
1052368 Thanks! I hope I can live up to the expectation!
Well, as promised, I present Gilda.
BUT I SAID NOTHING ABOUT CLIFFHANGERS, HAHAHA!!!!
As always, critique and questions are welcome. Next part will follow sooner than the last... I hope
Boo King Talos!
Talos: Look, mate. If we can't beat you, how can we beat Erebus?
Luna: Oh yeah. Hmm. Just a warning.
Talos: Business as usual, then. Party.