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Lux Tenebris


Creating stories is the only thing I have left where I feel like I add value to the world.

Comments ( 13 )

9571102
I thank you for your in-depth analysis of the story and I look forward to seeing more of it in the future.

Nah I'm just kidding, thank you for reading the story.

9571229
BTW, I think you meant Ascension as the title.

9571244
No, I did not. Accession involves rising to the throne. Ascension means becoming a higher being. For example, Twilight ascended to the state of an alicorn. Then we have a king's accession to his throne.

9571260
So how goes that other chapter on CoN? The one where you would tell everyone about the characters and original intent for the story.

9571265
Do you mean the character index? It feels like a bad idea now since it technically spoils details for the upcoming sequel.

9571268
Oh well. Could I ask one thing in the sequel? Imagine the funniest or most psychotic people you can think of and make him completely harmless unless he's in a fight he tried to avoid or something like that. Maybe these quotes that I don't know/ forgot the sources of might help:

"I need you to be still and clear your mind, this should only hurt immensely"

"I would apologize, but we both know that'd be bullshit"

"I tried decapitation and it doesn't work"

After eating something "hmmm, tastes like I might die"

"excellent, I've broken your body and your spirit, well time to die"

"I'll give you the first shot, see how that goes"

"he tragically commited suicide, you see, he stabbed himself in the back 37 times"

"HEAL ME MAGIC MAN"

Looks at a tatzlworm "IT'S SO CUTE"

"It's a scythe, what other reason do I need to want to use it"

9571268
Upcoming sequel?! Huzzah! Just finished reading CoN and enjoyed it immensely!

Saw this as the sequel, got hyped, then saw it was a oneshot and got a little less hyped. Now rehyped! XD

Oh man, this really hits hard. I really feel for Tyr, and even Guto. That blasted idol ruined an amazing world, but at least it made a great story?

Really though, fantastic job with this, fleshing out the descent into madness. The King is dead, All hail The King!

9723798
The sequel is on hold until I've finished my novel. But you will get it eventually.

9723880
Fair enough, good luck with your novel! I'll follow you to make sure I don't miss anything. :raritywink:

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