the chapters could be a bit longer,but other wise a great story

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Thanks, also I am writing these in my freetime, I don't often have much freetime, thats the main reason most of the stories I post have short chapters, or are oneshots
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9558536
aha,that's understandable

I think your doing a good job. Makes sense to change the style of ponies and gun names to regular. Makes it easier on you and us readers. I hope you keep it up.

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thanks

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There would be no point, it's a coal power plant, he'd never leave forced to guard it non stop

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What if he just put a few more reactors in place and locked the building?