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What happens when a visitor from the Undiscovered West visits Equestria?
An event that will change the Kingdom forever. Secrets get exposed, Old friends are reunited, dimensions get crossed. plans ruined, And the sun may never rise again.
Will twilight sparkle be able to fight an enemy that has been training for over 1000 years.
( I started writing this before season 9 aired. I will continue writing it as if season 9 never happened. )
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not bad☺
Its a good start! Hope to read some more in the future.
9582810
Thanks, I have many plans for the story
9552257
Thank you.
it alive
9719168
It is alive. And I plan to release chapter 3 much sooner. Like the end of this month. Thanks for waiting
How is everyone doing?
Verry intresting so far.
10306137
Thanks
Before I read this, I must know: What do the events of Season 9 have to do with the events of this story?
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I started writing it before season 9 aired so it exists before season 9 in a alt-reality where season 9 didn't happen
He really needs to work on self control, screaming and yelling while in a confined space while people are sleeping shows a complete disregard for others, and makes him extremely susceptible to mind games in a fight. All someone has to do is say something he doesn't like and he flies off the handle yelling like a 11 year old brat who got his xbox taking away.
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Very true. It could be a result of him being royalty. However I believe that by the time he started yelling he knew that he was in twilights silence bubble. The same one from amending fences. In the story I wanted to do a redemption arc. But I figured I would show The downfall as well. So I wanted to show more of who he was before needing to be redeemed. I hope you stick with the story because the gala is coming!!!!
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Part of the story is going to be about him learning self control. He is going to grow before the end of the story.
I'm just gonna ask this now. Why does the pony in the thumbnail have paws?
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He is a Lycan. Half pony, half-wolf.
However, they do use pearls. (the ones from the movie) to change into pony forms to keep their kingdom a secret.
I wonder what this accident with Big Mac was...
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Thank you. Somepony noticed, lol
That may be addressed in a future chapter.
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Took a while, didn't it?
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So where did you come up with lycans anyway?
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Lycans are another way of saying Wolf-Pony but I thought it sounded cooler. I was always curious about how Equestria would react to a meat eating species and would they be able to work with them.
So what better way to show that than a wolf-pony hybrid. One that is the exact opposite of Equestria. And to have Equestria need to figure out if they can indeed work together.
My OC is also an alicorn but he has his powers taken away so he has to earn them back.
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it feels like it, I posted chapter 5 in March of 2020. It has been almost a year.
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Does he remain half wolf when/if he gets those powers back?
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He remains half wolf throughout the fanfic. He starts off as an alicorn Lycan. “Something happens” and Celestia takes his powers away as punishment. So he loses his wings and his magic. So he becomes an earth Lycan. (An earth pony with fangs) but he does stay a Lycan he has no magic and no wings.
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Then I imagine that this is going to be a long fanfic.
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Kind of but I was thinking about breaking it into smaller stories and posting them as different stories. But I might let it be one very long story.
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How long is "a very long story?"
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In my notes the main story is split into different Arcs. The first Arc is the gala and is going to be about 26 to 30 chapters. I have at least 3 arcs planned so it might be 90 chapters. So I was thinking about splitting the arcs into separate stories.
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Is the Prologue new or rewritten?
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The prologue is new.
10772035
I meant in terms of word count, both in total of the story and individual chapter length.
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I try to keep each chapter less than 7,000 I do not know how long the story is going to be. I might cut it short because I don't know how long FimFic is going to be around for and because of work it takes me a long time to write.
To finish with this ark it is going to be another 100,000 words easily.
Am I missing something? This first chapter seems to reference stories I can't find.
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I am confused. I know I referenced the show and comic. What other references do you mean?
Dissatisfied civilians an angry old brother and other bits of insanity yeup that's Tuesday.
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I wonder if in Ponyville it would be. They did have an episode with a bug bear. And people acted like it was tuesday. lol.
Man what a heart warming chapter, I can't wait to read the next chapter no matter how long I have to wait.
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Thank you. I am going to try to get it done in the next few weeks.
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Take your time. No point in rushing art.