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Freglz


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It's time I told you a story, Apple Bloom.

A story about your sister.

A story about your brother.

A story about you.


An entry for the April Sibling Incest Contest.
Collectively edited by ROBCakeran53, AstralMouse and Snowybee.
Cover art by WillDrawForFood1.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 18 )

“Go on,” she said, “find your brother. Knowing how talkative he is, I’m sure he’s doing just fine on his own out there.”

This line was hilarious.

“A big, dumb… fun mistake.” She broke into a small, mischievous, melancholy smirk, taking a guilty pleasure in savouring the memory. It was a cute look on her. But then the look faded to something less playful and she popped the top off and had a drink. “And look where it’s gotten us.”


Aw, hell, why'd you have to go and do the Southern ponies like that?

Chillean #2 · 1 week ago · · · Us ·

Daww, this was sweet. Thumbs up! :ajsmug:

A surprisingly wholesome read. Well done.

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Limescale #6 · 1 week ago · · · Us ·

This didn't go in the direction I thought it would, and I'm happy about that. :)

I'm not crying, you're crying!

Good story.

(Although I thought the switch to third-person narration in chapter two was a little jarring)

Dustchu #8 · 1 week ago · · · Us ·

Now this right is some feckin' wholesome shit, gaaaaah.

Good show, Fregz, good show. Well written, nicely paced, and feelsy as hecc.

Keep it up mate, keep it up.

This was such a wholesome take on what a tradgety could do to a family in dispear. Realistic outcome, choices, and such a twist on a fan favorite taboo. Bravo.

And I remember promising myself right then and there I’d never let anything happen to you, because if I did, it’d be like losing him all over again, as well as losing you.

...Wait a minute

...Is Big Mac dead?

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"Him" refers to Bright Mac. I was confused for a bit too.

Very well done.

The first chapter made me want a fic where the incest is subverted and it comes out it was Uncle Orange. I was kinda expecting that with the awkward hug and the premise of something that dark and secret is intriguing.

I don’t usually go for this basic premise, but this one was exceptionally well played.

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Then why not 'losing them all over again' instead of specifically him? Does AJ not like Pear Butter? Unless Bright Mac is actually the father of Apple Bloom, I'm confused

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The point is that Apple Bloom and Bright Mac have the exact same coloration. Yellow fur, red mane and tail. That’s why she focuses in on him there.

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because Apple Bloom looks like Bright. If AB had looked like PB, she would have been mentioned instead of Bright. There's a lot of psychological weirdness when people encounter lookalikes of something or someone they know, e.g. Harry Potter and everyone's constant focus on his mom's eyes.

Ow my feels

H2GO #17 · 1 week ago · · · Us ·

''SWEET HOME ALABAMA !!!!!!''

This story was amazing and heartbreaking. I don't often tear up as much as this when reading fanfic but I needed to give my Applejack and Applebloom plushies long hugs after I got done reading this. Thank you for writing it and sharing it with us.

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