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She, and all her passengers, spent two months traveling across the featureless plains of nothingness, as the final hope for all mankind.
But before her fusion plants run out of fuel, a new hope is spotted: An exit.
Now, she escapes- and nothing, not herself, not the citizens of the world she's escaping to, knows exactly what's coming.


Would you believe it if I told you this story was inspired by the realization that one of my other stories made the feature box?
Tags may be updated as the story progresses.

... Hiatus because I have no clue where the plot should go, or if I should just finish it off as a one-shot instead.

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Would you believe it if I told you this story was inspired by the realization that one of my other stories made the feature box?

Really? Which one?

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TIron Mountain
An ancient war machine is awakened by an enemy strike- but can it figure out what's going on?
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(following new chapter publication earlier today, as part of the rewrite)

It was only for a few minutes, and in the very bottom slot, before it was shuffled off by another story...

BUT those bottom three slots are reserved for previously-featured stories that have been recently updated!

(That makes it not only my first story, but my first featured story. Of course I'm excited!)

Well this is an interesting start, let us see where this goes, yes?

I recently noticed something disturbing, actually. I misplaced it -- it's in the history on my other computer, which is currently going a disk transfer that STILL HASN'T FINISHED -- but it showed a bunch of gifs of feats accomplished by ponies in the cartoon.

If you ignore the colorful exterior, they are somewhere up there with the inhabitants of the MCU, and it's probably a similar deathworld too. I am since of the belief that anything SHORT OF A BOLO wouldn't be even noticed, and an actual BOLO might only be on par. I mean, I was trying to figure out how to make a BOLO less OP for mine, but I might actually need to work the other way...

There are numerous scenes of ponies being shoved through walls unharmed (and with no assault charges pressed, so this must be either minor or normal!) or kicking rocks at near the speed of sound. Twilight can rapidly teleport and land in different positions or directions from how she left, Dash is shown literally Flash-stepping, and one scene shows Fluttershy flying vertically without actually flapping her wings (there are other scenes of this sort of thing, and Dash's Rainboom actually counts, since she SHOULD have hit terminal velocity long before. Regardless, that pretty much proves that their wings are reactionless drives). If one goes by the shock cone (instead of it representing a weather-magic shield), Dash is going at around Mach 10 at Rainboom velocity, and Luna can actively handle hundreds of solar outputs in some of the moving of the moon she does, especially in the comics. They rate at least a TWO on the Kardashev scale! And that's the weaker Princess!

A similar thread I found: https://www.reddit.com/r/respectthreads/comments/4f4qzi/respect_equestria_mlpfim/

I like this please continue it

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