After a long sunny day of crusading with her friends, Apple Bloom spots something strange appear outside their clubhouse. When she and her friends investigate, a strange object attaches itself onto the farm filly's hoof. Unable to get it off, Apple Bloom is forced to live with the alien device for now. However, the device holds secrets, secrets that could be the key to keeping Equestria safe...
Aliens, Omnitrix and CMC are not mine and belong to there rightful owners.
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This was a good read. I'm going to keep an eye on this story.
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same here
I like it. I'm definitely tracking this.
Ok, this is interesting.
I'm glad you stuck with the idea of the transformations being Homosapien in shape. I figured most authors would have made them "ponyfied."
I feel the start is very rushed, there should have been a slow build-up of CMC discovering the omnitrix. Being a hero sounds more like something Scootaloo would do, not Apple Bloom.
Also, I have a problem with the names fo the aliens. Names such as XLR8 and Heatblast are names Ben himself came up with because it's tied to his character. Shouldn't there be new names for the aliens? It happened when we were introduced to Ben 23 in Omniverse, though that's just my opinion.
This is an idea with potential, so I'm glad to see someone's take on it.
hay continue it
Would've been nice to see this story continue
Next chapter?
do continue this
More good