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Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo watch as a meteor fell right next to the club house. But inside is a strange device that gets stuck on Apple Bloom's left forehoof. Next thing the three know, Apple Bloom can transform into ten different aliens. Apple Bloom now wants to help defend Equestria from evil, but little does she know what is looming above the planet, willing to do anything to get that device.

Aliens, Omnitrix and CMC are not mine and belong to there rightful owners.

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This was a good read. I'm going to keep an eye on this story.

I like it. I'm definitely tracking this.

Scootaloo and Apple Bloom quickly stopped talking and looked out the window. Sure enough, a group of ponies were gathering around two unicorns who seemed to be getting ready for something. On closer inspection however, Apple Bloom recognised one of them as Twilight Sparkle, the other one she had no idea. The other unicorn had light blue fur with a light blue and white mane and tail. She was wearing a grey cloak with some sort of necklace on her neck.

Oh so that's where we are in the timeline!

Ok, this is interesting.
I'm glad you stuck with the idea of the transformations being Homosapien in shape. I figured most authors would have made them "ponyfied."
I feel the start is very rushed, there should have been a slow build-up of CMC discovering the omnitrix. Being a hero sounds more like something Scootaloo would do, not Apple Bloom.
Also, I have a problem with the names fo the aliens. Names such as XLR8 and Heatblast are names Ben himself came up with because it's tied to his character. Shouldn't there be new names for the aliens? It happened when we were introduced to Ben 23 in Omniverse, though that's just my opinion.
This is an idea with potential, so I'm glad to see someone's take on it.

Please tell me she unlocks Way Big sometime in the future and smashes Tirek into the dust. Because that would just be awesome!

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Thank you for the feedback. I was wondering about that myself and am constantly trying to keep Apple Bloom's attitude like it should be. Honestly though, I like the names that Ben gave them and I really don't think it would be better if they were named differently.

Unknown creature claims to be protector and gets rekt...hhmmmmmmmmmm

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