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Fin


Am I a Broni?No Idea I just love fanfichion, but I got to say MLP has some of the best. -Fin

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The telling of a dream I had moments before I wrote this.(real dream too!)

In a unusual dream I had me and Fluttershy try to escape a unseen force out to get her.

(Teen to be safe. Its a little dark, but its almost nonexistent, and do dreams count as Alternate Universe?
my first fanfic ever so be nice and tell me of any errors i can fix thanks)

-Fin

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And that's how Equestria was made!!! Glad to hear Flutters is okay, interesting; the only qualms I have are that the format might not have been the best for this and that the grammar had some issues...

A suggestion perhaps... You could make this be the first chapter / overview, then possibly add chapters that explain it more with some artistic license...

who rated this one?! that is completely unfair. i think it deserves at the very least a 3.5.

Fin

63766 ya grammar is not my strong point. I will see if I can find someone to Pre-read for me.

Vivid dreaming to conquer the nightmares for the win. :rainbowdetermined2: Especially for fluttershy's sake. :yay:

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The technical aspects leave a lot to be desired and, as a reader, I can't help but want to be actually drawn into this dream world rather than be told about it. However, this straight-to-paper approach has its own unique appeal and comes off as genuine and mysterious where it otherwise might have seemed contrived. All that aside, it's an interesting flight of fancy. Thank you for sharing it with us. +1

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