Not bad, sort of feels like the beginning of something greater though.

This could go a number of ways. It almost feels like an unfinished story, though I still like it

What I like in this story is how it, to me, has a more genuine feel to somebody trying to free themselves from shame by involving a friend they hoped would be able to understand why they like what they like.

In a lot of stories about those who like to wear and use diapers, you tend to get a lot of, "Oh! This is actually quite fun!". Here you are providing, to me, a more honest response of Scoot trying to help Sweetie save some face while letting her friend know that she doesn't judge her for wearing a wetting diapers but has no desire to ever do such a thing again.

It was a nice setting and a real solid 'slice Of Life' when it comes to doing what you feel can help you feel better about yourself. Keeping secrets is no fun and feeling alone is even less fun. Sweetie simply wanted to get her feelings out in the open and, even if it wasn't a win, she at least tried.

Nicely done! Very glad you posted.

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I'm glad you enjoyed the read 😊 the original link was actually up 4 years ago on Deviant Art, and omg (how'd you know???) I totally took the "slice of life" tag out last minute in assuming I could've been wrong about how I captured that aspect. Thanks for clearing up those doubts for me! Also thanks for the mini review there as well.

cute way cute squee *malfunction* bzzt does...not...compute shutting down bew *shuts down*