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Banshee531


I've always been a lover and writer of fanfiction, but it wasn't until I got into MLP that I really found something I loved writing about. Hope you all enjoy.

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This story is a sequel to Flash Sentry Chronicles: Rainbow Rocks


Flash, Twilight and friends have beaten the Sirens. All seemed well as they returned to Equestria, but true peace never lasts. Now, the Elements of Harmony find themselves in a place that will reveal a truth that was thought to be all but forgotten. And as a darkness rises from these depths, will they survive this revelation, or is it all over?

Written by AandWguy

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Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 18 )

Okay... an interesting start... is this about the start of Springer's life?

Okay, so is the Mane 6 and Flash seeing the past of how Springer came to be or what, they didn't get sent back in time did they?

You got featured on May 14th at 10:45 EST AM.

This is a really interesting start. We finally get see more of the jakhowls. I know that Sharp Paw has been mentioned a few times in the past, but maybe now we'll get to see him in action and see what happened to him and the jakhowls. I wonder if his future child is actually Springer? There would probably be an interesting explanation behind that if that were the case.

Dark Mist seems like major trouble. If Shade turns out like him someday then dark times are ahead. I wonder why Twilight, Flash, and the others are seeing this though? Maybe Luna is showing it to them in a dream?

Also, congratulations on this story getting featured.

"Ki ki ki….ki ki ki!" the Trickster laughed, releasing his claw before leaning back in his throne. "Ki ki ki...ki ki ki...ah, that's brilliant! I love this so much! Ki ki ki...ki ki ki!"

Are weird annoying evil laughs standard for Tricksters? :ajbemused: I can't even hear what that voice sounds like outside of my imagination, and I'm already sick of it.

Oh my gosh! The little jakhowl is going to be important later, is it? Unless suspended animation is somehow involved, I highly doubt that Sharp Paw's child is Springer. :applejackunsure:

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Are weird annoying evil laughs standard for Tricksters?

As amusing as that idea is, that's a no. Its a reference to One Piece, as characters always have distinct laughs in that series.

What the! What is going on. Why are they viewing the past or memory. And is Springer's parents... THEM?!?!

So this explains what happened to most of the Jackhowls. Might I guess that somehow the egg survived, and a thousand years later it hatched into Springer?

Wait, so are Jackhowls a species of monotreme?
So is this whole fic is about Springer and his foe, Shade?

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Well, Jackhowls are based on the Pokemon Riolu and Lucario. And all Pokemon are egg layers.

Well this is getting more and more interesting. If that Egg really is Springer then maybe that is why Luna has kinda been a mentor to Springer, because he is her partner’s offspring.

Also, the part where the girls were freaking out at the thought of being ghosts was funny.

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Yeah, the parts with them thinking they're ghosts is probably my favorite part of this chapter. Especially the Applejack dialogue.

9634646 Honestly, when I first read it I thought you'd written Twilight out of character. Her thinking they're ghosts is against her scientific mind. I'm glad she explained she didn't think they were.

Shade's coming back, isn't he? :ajbemused: Ooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhh! I don't like that guy. Please tell me that he's going to end up in Tartarus by the time this story is over. :ajbemused:

Wow. This is great. We get to see some of the back ground. I'm still betting Springer is Calm and Sharp's offspring. Great job here. I can't wait to see what the Dark Mist is planning.

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Why thank you. Glad you're enjoying it.

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