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Godslittleprincess


I think Twilight's best pony because I relate to her the best.

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This story is a sequel to The Heart of Christmas


Flash, Twilight, and their friends volunteer to look after a group of foster children on a trip to Camp Everfree. Although Flash is happy to have to opportunity to give these kids the best week of their lives, he can't help but feel worried about a certain green-haired boy who shares a past with his girlfriend. What does the week have in store for our heroes, and will Flash survive the week, or will his insecurities finally break him?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 61 )

So no Pharynx yet?
While First might have a good grasp on Timber, there has to be... oh sweet Celestia I can't believe I'm saying this... some redeeming qualities that Timber has for Twilight to have dated him...
To be honest I was kind of expecting something more akin to Percus and The Cetus (or kraken to those that only seen the movie Clash of The Titans) with Magnus like the Roman's take of Perseus with Sonumbula as Andromeda... but St. George the Dragon-slayer works.

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Foxhelm, I'm very sorry about this, but there might not be any Pharynx for a good long while. I'll explain during FlashLight Week.

Oh man, I can tell this is going to be a fun read. I'll need to check it out when I have some time.

Man I can just feel the author's dislike of Timber... not that I like the character all that much, but still
...
As for the cold fusion thing, Twi, honey, let it go.
Kind of figured that the soon to be released live-action remake of Dumbo was why the kite was named that.

Finally managed to finish reading this opening chapter. I like where this is going so far. Legend of Everfree only gets worse the more I think about it and leaves a bad taste in my mouth, but fanfics like yours make me feel all better.

I especially liked the story of Flash Magnus. Was the Princess he saved named Somnambula by any chance?

Looks good so far. What song was Pinkie singing.

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Well, the Flash Magnus story is based off "Saint George and the Dragon," and in that story, the princess doesn't normally have a name. I don't really ship the Pillars with anyone, so 🤷.

I am a man. I am a man. I am a...a...a...:fluttercry:...:raritycry:

Yeah, you may be overdoing it.

This was a good story. Can't wait to see more of this series, if their is more.

*Reads the author's notes*
:twilightoops: this doesn't bold well

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You're going to have to be a little more specific. :applejackunsure:

a little jealous of you.

Envy would be a better word here.

“You have lost,” First Base’s smug grin said to Timber.

:facehoof: First, my boy, you're stupid, well at the very least not thinking. You don't kick a man while he's down, he will have justice.

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He hasn't even turned 14 yet. Of course, he's not going to be thinking well. :ajbemused: Also, if you've read the one story I wrote with him as the main character, you'd know that taunting Timber is NOT the stupidest thing he's ever done.

Flash drove his fist into Timber’s stomach, causing the older boy to double over in pain.

Okay I get that Timber was wrong to kiss Twilight against her will, but Flash, my boy, you just committed assult... or battery, depending on the state...., I get you're angery and for the most part right to be so, but your right to be angry ends at Timber's person.

To the author... yeah I don't like Timber either, I think I might actually dislike more than you, but if you look at what I am doing with my AU's answer to Legend of Everfree, well it's because I know I will take making him the villain of the story, him being a jerk a lot farther then you have.
I would say dial back the Timber as an antgonist... but maybe that's something for the next time he appears in your works.
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I have to agree with you on that

*reads the author's notes*, yeah I just avoid making him worse than a reluctant/unwilling partner to the story's main antgonist...

Hey maybe we have Timber's redeeming quality, he's assertive.
:ajbemused:
It's a virtue depending on the circumstances and assertive guys are know to attact women... just... Saiyan.
:ajbemused:
I'll see myself out.

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when I was 13 I knew better then to antagonize guys that were 4 to 5 years older than me... but I concede the point, it's not the stupidest thing First did, but it's got to be in the top 20.

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Fair enough. Can’t have everything all the time I guess.

Timber, who had also managed to get Denny and Lean’s kite up, frowned jealously as he watched Flash help launch three more kites into the sky. What does everybody seem to like about that guy? There’s absolutely nothing special about him. Heck, that annoying brat that he calls his brother has more personality than he does!

It’s a little funny, because almost everything that he just said is a reason why I think Flash is better than Timber!
As a fellow fan of Flash and someone who also dislikes Timber, I understand your frustration with him and am enjoying this story so far.

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I have no idea if Timber will appear again, but he and Flash will definitely be on better terms if he does, and that's a really big if. Again, I will explain on FlashLight Week.

Also, regarding the punch, I did go through a few other potential scenarios for this chapter as a whole, but this one just turned out the most satisfying. Also, I'm pretty sure one of my readers has been out for Timber's blood since the day that he appeared. If he had gotten to this chapter before you did, he'd probably be upset if Flash DIDN'T punch him. :rainbowlaugh: Heck, when he does get to this chapter, he'd probably be wishing that I hadn't made Flash hold back. :rainbowlaugh:

Nice slow chapter. I think I spotted a Big Hero 6 reference, I like that.

That was so heartwarming. Everything from Flash talking to his brother to him talking with Twilight over his fears and jealousy.

I admit, Timber talks nerd like Twilight a lot, but half the time I think he is just faking it. Gotta admit, even if First Base was in the wrong to attack Timber, it must have been embarrassing for Timber to get beaten down by a kid.

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He's almost 14 so not a child, but yes, yes it was. :ajsmug:

Flash stepped forward so that he was between Timber and Twilight and looked Timber in the eye. The blaze in his eyes caused Timber’s very bones to shake. Then, to everyone’s shock, Flash drove his fist into Timber’s stomach, causing the older boy to double over in pain.

Oh yeah! You don’t know how long I have wanted something like that to happen! Timber has been on my bad side since he first appeared, and I have disliked how Flash has suffered because of him, so that felt so satisfying. Honestly, if it were perfect I probably would have had Flash punch Timber in the face or beat him down, but this was close enough, and Timber was already beaten by First Base anyway. Also, let’s face it, Timber deserved that after stealing Twi’s first kiss. Hopefully she can put it out of her mind by sharing her first real kiss with Flash.

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Somehow, I just knew you were going to say that. :ajbemused::ajsmug:

That was a fun story. I still am not a fan of Timber though, but at least Flash and Twi are putting the bad experience behind them.

Comment posted by soulmates deleted Oct 9th, 2020

Huh, ok! Couple of things to say about this chapter:

1. I'm not proud to say it, but I laughed OUT LOUD everytime one of Timber's plans to impress Twilight failed MISERABLY while Flash was being great with the kids without even trying x'D

2. First Base sassing Timber is 100% me if I was in the EqG world

3. That song choice <3 YES

4. I've kinda feel the same way about grades. I still kinda have a hard time accepting it when I get anything under 80%, but I'm working on it. I am aware that getting recognition isn't everything, and that using what you learn to do some good with it is what it's all about.

*SNIFF* OOOOOOOH that intimate scene with Twilight and Flash, THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! :raritycry: :raritycry: :raritycry: :raritycry: :raritycry:

Also, punching Timber for talking trash about Flash? Gloating to Timber about Twilight preferring Flash over him? I SWEAR, First represents me PERFECTLY in this story!

P.S: I know you're saving the SciFlash kiss for when you're ready, and it's fine, I respect that, but... oh, you better make it worth the wait :fluttershbad:

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You know, I'm surprised that you didn't mention Timber getting jealous of Flash's well-toned abs. :rainbowlaugh:

“All you have to do is answer one question for me, alright? Just one little question,” Timber stated with a disconcerting calmness. “Why you? Out of all the guys Twilight could have picked for a new boyfriend, why did it have to be you? That skinny twerp with the glasses would have been a step up from you, so why did she choose you, huh?”

BECAUSE HE'S A GENTLEMAN AND A SWEETHEART AND THE PERFECT GUY FOR TWILIGHT!!
AND MOST IMPORTANTLY, BETTER THAN YOU, YOU ROTTEN WOOD-CHIN WITH LEGS!!!!!!! :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage: :flutterrage:

OOOOOOFFFF!! Sorry, had to get that off my chest :trixieshiftleft: NO ONE speaks trash of MY boy in MY presence, ESPECIALLY NOT Timber!

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Okay, so you're not mad about Flash punching Timber or Twilight having her kiss stolen? :fluttershyouch:

“Timber stole my first kiss!” Twilight blurted out as her voice broke.

Where are my knives??????? :DDDDDDDDDD


EDIT: Now I'm done with the chapter. Look, I don't care if you made Timber a massive jerk, I am ENJOYING this. Flash punching him was BEYOND satisfying to me! I am 100% biased, but hey, what's wrong with a little OOC fun once in a while? :rainbowlaugh:

But yeah when Flash starts getting all insecure I'm just sitting here screaming like "YOU'RE WAY SUPERIOR TO TIMBER, BOY, STOP TALKING YOURSELF DOWN, YA CINNAMON ROLL, GOOOOOOOOOOOOSH!!!"

Still love it xP

Nice story! I still dislike Timber, but that's almost impossible to change :D
I did get a little melancholy when they sang "Friendship Through the Ages" :( But that's the beauty of fanfics, we can set the characters up in any timeline and time period we want x'D

Flash smiled at her before turning his attention back to his charges. Timber watched the interaction with a deep scowl. Earlier that morning, Twilight had been blushing and trying to keep her eyes above Flash’s shirtless abs. What even was the big deal? The guy wasn’t THAT jacked. Sure, he was well-toned, but he was still pretty skinny.

HUH! You wish you had half of that, dontcha, TIMBER? ;D

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Forget the knives! Get the Rainbow nukes! (Elements of Harmony we are trashing this party!)

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Micro Chips's reaction when he finds out that Timber called him a "skinny twerp with [the] glasses": y.yarn.co/858d3f42-a9d1-4f0c-8eb5-1630bfa39688_text_hi.gif :rainbowlaugh:

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The first: no. The second: yEAH.

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I put together a soundtrack of the songs that inspired this story if you're interested. It's in my blog.

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