pinkie pie feels a little stressed out about growing up, and it came on the worst time posibble: camp everfree. but luckly, she's got the perfect girl to help her out with that right here with here in the tent, and they could talk about something that has been long overdue: for the both of them.
The idea was pretty good, but there are a few major issues that need addressing.
* Sunset Shimmer
* Pinkie Pie
* Rarity
* Applejack
* Rainbow Dash
* Fluttershy
* Twilight Sparkle
There are a few typos and homophone confusion. For example:
It should be: